Nobara to Pretender

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Surprisingly rough. I tend to read very short series, usually just one volume, so two volume series often feel more spread out and relaxed. This still managed to feel incredibly rushed and stilted. A not insignificant part was the scanlator's overly-literal translation coming off as stiff, but the story and pacing were also very immature. It felt like the author wanted the seme to come off as more of a bad boy but he was defanged pretty much immediately. On top of it all, it looks like overly-well-adjusted therapy vomit dialogue has broken out of webtoons and into the realm of physical manga.
 
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Heartwarming ! and i missed seeing such clothes design, grandeur and frilz and all. I agree that it feels quite soon for them to be in lve with each other but uke is very lovely i really get it
 

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