@Magneticmagnet
first page, stupid dragon appears!
yeah it is pretty generic.. No one ever choose something that really new and you know.. interestin... like "shadow behemoth from the past that defeated the retired hero and then went to sleep for a decade,
then got carroted by the mc after it awakening."
Not some normal looking forest with normal looking dragon labelled 'Rank S'.
The rest seems okay but... hm... I just hate that forest and dragon part