Not Your Typical Reincarnation Story - Vol. 1 Ch. 19

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Huh! Well, I have to admit that does a better job explaining "and the main character can't just Tell Anyone" better then just having it go "...And she DOESNT because ehs uh. doesnt. think. It'll work."

Anyways the perfume Lil Miss Heroine wears is kinda suspicious, right? theres this recocurring obsession with it, and these 'headaches'.
 
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I love that the author made it so the FML actually goes thru things leading to more things instead of the usual FML that are so detached from their world because they act with no actual basis just because they know the future. I guess no i just realize how this FML never fuss about the futere.
 
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"Hmmm, I've written myself into a corner, if she tell how her father actually abused her, I might have to think hard to keep the story going instead of relying on easy drama... Ah, I know, Deus Ex Machina rules appearing in a video game style UI out of nowhere. Oh, lets say there's 3 rules, so I can get two others 'get out of jail cards' later!"

Now, I know the author probably planned it from the start, but that's still what it feels like. The "rules" thing should have been established from the start, with something like "There's 4 rules. Rule 1: Do not mention you're a reincarnator", which doesn't affect the story.

The way it's written, you think "great, she'll finally say she's been abused, and get some support from the duchess", only to get whiplashed.
 

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