NTREVENGE - Ch. 33

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Bro is playing house with one of his real gf's abusers while she falls apart alone. What a meme.
She wasn't his girlfriend, but I agree. This guy has lost the plot and completely forgotten that he was trying to avenge his childhood friend while flirting with her rapist's sister and catching feelings for the girls that tormented him.
 
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Bro is playing house with one of his real gf's abusers while she falls apart alone. What a meme.
I am not crazy! I know he teleported. I knew he was the real culprit. He made us arrest a false culprit. As if I could ever make such a mistake. Never. Never! I just – I just couldn’t prove it. He covered his tracks, he got those idiot girls he kidnapped to lie for him. You think this is something? You think this is bad? This? This chicanery? He’s done worse. That Girlfriend of his! Are you telling me that a man just happens to forget she exists just like that? No! He orchestrated it! MC-kun! He even made a quasi confession to us! And it saved him! And it shouldn’t have. What was I thinking? He’ll never change. He’ll never change! Ever since I've first seen him, always the same! Couldn’t keep his hands of making shady comments! But not our MC-kun! Couldn’t be precious MC-kun! Abusing them blind! And HE gets to have a harem? What a sick joke! I should’ve stopped him when I had the chance! …And you, you have to stop him! You
 
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I can already see what is foreshadowed...
Guy is becoming a little too happy and relaxed with his targets and his situation, is even getting cold feet at the tought of involving the sister of the rapist in his revenge.
Look like Asmodeus predicted this. I can see why she kept hidden the situation with childhood friend.
 
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I think I need to re-read this from like chapter one, maybe few times, to try to understand MC. It seems he behaves like a brain-less drone. Every other person kinda works fine, kidnapped girls falling for the captor? Sure could work. Rapist doing his NTR rapist stuff? Sure. Police having magical "insight"? Watched enough TV shows about cops to be fine with it. But MC? He is like a brain-less drone, driven by mixed signals send by his dick and demon "master", splashed with his typical beta spine-less cuckery thoughts.

At this point I just actually hope his life and the rapists dude lives get ruined, and the bad girls get freed and learn to not be bitches and have normal lives, and the raped CHF somehow gets thought to have a normal love-full live too. Cause if CHF ends being lustful dick loving slut like typical NTR female, bad guys end up in jail but not for shit they did, but for shit MC managed to "accuse" them off (like that one dude taken for supposedly kidnapping girls), and the bad girls become full blown harem going for MC dick, and he himself somehow becomes a "villain in glasses" playboy - happy ending - then I will be heavily disappointed. Especially if they somehow add MC NTRing back his CHF.

Like I said in previous chapter. I kinda think this will end up with MC fucked over. He will get his harem of girls he NTRed in revenge, somehow find himself liking them, and then he will remember his CHF - broken beyond saving, realize his whole revenge plan was useless waste of time. Potentially harem girls will get "freed" and accuse him of all the shit he done and him going to jail or something. And demon girl laughing at him, maybe even telling him it was all her plan and she used him and stuff (like her not telling him anything about whats happening to CHF behind the dudes revenge plans).
 
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Man, I almost want him to give the blonde girl a chance for redemption. Well, almost. She's way too pitiful.
Is she the one who was a virgin and didn't want to have sex before marriage or something like that?

I don't have a characters.txt file of notes for this one and it's not worth the effort to go back and reread prior chapters to create one now.
 
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It may seem strange to many, but the way the protagonist reacted to the blonde girl's change of attitude is extremely believable. Hatred and resentment are powerful feelings but, also depending on the character of the person who harbors them, they can subside very quickly when the object of resentment manages (intentionally or unintentionally) to make amends for his or her mistakes (in this case, it seems with the aforementioned sincere change of demeanor).
 
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Well... I have wondered what would happen if we give the cuck in an NTR a fighting chance... now i know, they go all edge with complicated revenge plots, only to fall half way there because they have issues...

...meanwhile at the actual victim´s side, all going even darker... hope this demon girl just says "ok, have my fun, now is time to go to that girl and let her have her fun now"... totally support an ending where the girl ends up turning into a demon herself and making everyone, MC included, her food
 
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Dang bonding over a vtuber/streamer. I'm surprised he wouldn't have some kinda delusion spell to convince her that /he's/ the one she admires or so but guess he doesn't need to at this point. Still expecting asmodeus to pull the rug out from under him/betraying him at the end or 'consuming' all the lust/negative feelings and such before 'moving on' to the next tgarget

Sister pretty sus to be honest, with how mc keeps wondering how shes so nice compared to his bully and the employee that quit because they “didnt get along” makes me think its setting her up to be bullying someone else so mc has an excuse to break her.

it would be a shame/too cliche if both family members were bullies/terrible ppl, i can imagine some siblings having opposite personalities, if not 'her not bullying directly but playing the victim/manipulating her brother to intimidate ppl she dislikes' but it'd be more of an emotional blow to that guy if his 'innocent sister' grew fond of MC i guess
 
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JUST CHECK UP ON YOUR CHILDHOOD FRIEND ALREADY! DAMN!
Bro is getting swayed by the bully who got pacified. Insane.
I think he forgot the wrong doings just because of being brainwashed and the cutesy act.
Also why is she there with just an apron on? Don't tell me she was not expecting him because that would just be weird.
 

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