NTREVENGE - Ch. 58

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What are you even talking about...? Asmode brainwashed them through sex torture. Not only did she do that, she stuck her finger in one of their brains to make sure her "love" was maximum or whatever. Literal brainwashing. The other one had a weaker constitution. You think they suddenly went deredere out of nowhere? They hated his guts. Obviously he's not keyaru, lmao. You entirely misunderstood my reference. I was speaking strictly on how keyaru treated them afterwards, not how he changed them. It was the demon.

No... they are not the "same bitch." They have been made to love him, through torture, brainwashing, and demon bullshit. It doesn't matter if they did what they did, or even know what they did, if they were forced to love him and have highly altered personalities as a result. That's the point. He's losing his mind over a manufactured, mentally broken person who is not the same person they used to be.
So one of them was using magic, Asmodeus really stuck his finger in Hina's head and made her think she loved Sakuraba, and even used magic to increase sensitivity and other succubus things, as for Chiaki, there really was that torture of being left without food and she developed Stockholm syndrome, as for Miku, it happened through a different process, since Sakuraba helped her take revenge on Hina and Chiaki and put her in a position of power where he was keeping them captive, for now Sakuraba had his memory messed with so he wouldn't think about Asuza and probably the power of his contract with Asmodeus makes him more sexually hungry because she is a succubus and there is also the part of the sin of lust or at least that is what has been shown so far.
 
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So one of them was using magic, Asmodeus really stuck his finger in Hina's head and made her think she loved Sakuraba, and even used magic to increase sensitivity and other succubus things, as for Chiaki, there really was that torture of being left without food and she developed Stockholm syndrome, as for Miku, it happened through a different process, since Sakuraba helped her take revenge on Hina and Chiaki and put her in a position of power where he was keeping them captive, for now Sakuraba had his memory messed with so he wouldn't think about Asuza and probably the power of his contract with Asmodeus makes him more sexually hungry because she is a succubus and there is also the part of the sin of lust or at least that is what has been shown so far.
I'm not sure if you're agreeing or disagreeing with me as you've essentially reiterated what I just said, but with the inclusion of Miku, who doesn't matter in this case (which is why I don't mention her). It should already be understood that she's both a victim and a perpetrator, and didn't really need to be "brainwashed" because her interests (for the most part) align with Sakurabas (revenge). She was subject to some of the starvation/etc as a sort of "punishment" and test due to being instrumental in his bullying so she could have a "clean" slate to be on his side and exact her revenge against them. This is why she became the warden. So, again, yes they (the two girls who matter here) were brainwashed, through various means. One, as mentioned, was through literal demon magic, and the other, also as mentioned, had a weaker constitution, and was mindfucked by use of the physical and vanilla style mental tortures that came with being in a dungeon.
 
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I'm not sure if you're agreeing or disagreeing with me as you've essentially reiterated what I just said, but with the inclusion of Miku, who doesn't matter in this case (which is why I don't mention her). It should already be understood that she's both a victim and a perpetrator, and didn't really need to be "brainwashed" because her interests (for the most part) align with Sakurabas (revenge). She was subject to some of the starvation/etc as a sort of "punishment" and test due to being instrumental in his bullying so she could have a "clean" slate to be on his side and exact her revenge against them. This is why she became the warden. So, again, yes they (the two girls who matter here) were brainwashed, through various means. One, as mentioned, was through literal demon magic, and the other, also as mentioned, had a weaker constitution, and was mindfucked by use of the physical and vanilla style mental tortures that came with being in a dungeon.
I'm not agreeing or disagreeing, I'm just saying that the only one who actually used magic was Hina, but Miku deserved the revenge that happened to her, the protagonist was put in that situation and later what happened to her childhood friend was her fault in a way, even though she was feeling forced and threatened, she helped Hina put Sakuraba in a situation where he couldn't fight back or tell or report the bullying he was suffering.
 
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Funny thing is that both manga have the same author if I'm not mistaken, also what was the demons reason again for helping the MC in confinement king?


All of them? it was the 3 bullies and the long black haired girl. Not his childhood friend and not his current gf
I read the LN until it stopped. The more the MC powers up with his confiment powers the stronger the Demons power becomes in her world. Example a fort magically appears to help out her forces in the demon war.
 
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Funny thing is that both manga have the same author if I'm not mistaken, also what was the demons reason again for helping the MC in confinement king?

yeah i know that's why i mentioned it. idk if his newer femdom? series is that much better if not the same versus role reversal

Wait, who is Imai again? Daughter of someone important?

wasn't that one of the coworkers that guy's sister worked with where they walked in on him assaulting her instead of asuka?
 
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I'm not agreeing or disagreeing, I'm just saying that the only one who actually used magic was Hina, but Miku deserved the revenge that happened to her, the protagonist was put in that situation and later what happened to her childhood friend was her fault in a way, even though she was feeling forced and threatened, she helped Hina put Sakuraba in a situation where he couldn't fight back or tell or report the bullying he was suffering.
Okay, but I never suggested otherwise. In fact, I said from the beginning that magic was used on her, while the other girl simply had a weak constitution and was mindfucked in the dungeon. I also never said Miku didn't deserve it. Miku simply wasn't relevant to the reply I made to the other guy because she has unique circumstances (both victim and perp) and wasn't brainwashed, but punished instead. Essentially, you're just informing me of information I either already know, or already said myself.

I feel like your comments would be better directed at the person who tried to tell me that none of this happened, and not really to me, who is well aware that they did, and have already stated as much in a reply to someone who thinks they didn't, as well as in replies to you.
 
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So... this translation is kinda iffy, and I think the Spanish team’s version is more accurate. But at least this team is putting in the work to release chapters quickly.

So here’s my question: should I keep sharing the secondhand translation from the Spanish team when they release their chapter first? They took their time with chapter 58, but they already released chapter 59.

Give me a :slap: if you want me to continue, or give me a :aquadrink: if you think my job here is done.
 
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So... this translation is kinda iffy, and I think the Spanish team’s version is more accurate. But at least this team is putting in the work to release chapters quickly.

So here’s my question: should I keep sharing the secondhand translation from the Spanish team when they release their chapter first? They took their time with chapter 58, but they already released chapter 59.

Give me a :slap: if you want me to continue, or give me a :aquadrink: if you think my job here is done.
I always appreciate your work you know but i genuinely believe that this doesn't worth your time or energy.
 
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So... this translation is kinda iffy, and I think the Spanish team’s version is more accurate. But at least this team is putting in the work to release chapters quickly.

So here’s my question: should I keep sharing the secondhand translation from the Spanish team when they release their chapter first? They took their time with chapter 58, but they already released chapter 59.

Give me a :slap: if you want me to continue, or give me a :aquadrink: if you think my job here is done.

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So... this translation is kinda iffy, and I think the Spanish team’s version is more accurate. But at least this team is putting in the work to release chapters quickly.

So here’s my question: should I keep sharing the secondhand translation from the Spanish team when they release their chapter first? They took their time with chapter 58, but they already released chapter 59.

Give me a :slap: if you want me to continue, or give me a :aquadrink: if you think my job here is done.
Honestly i stopped caring about this manga, so do whatever you want, but i want you to know how much i appreciate you doing all this. Go read some peak after translating so much of this digusting slop
 
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Welp, here’s Chapter 59, and I’ve added the Spanish team’s comments on Chapters 58 and 59 as bonus content.

FYI, Chapter 58 was titled 'Concerns.'

Chapter 59 - Miwa Imai

The chapter opens with the MC leaving Chiaki after banging her in the apartment.

Chiaki: "Are you leaving already..?"
MC: "Yeah... I’ll be back tonight."
Chiaki: "...Huh?"
MC: "I don’t dislike curry."
Chiaki: "Yeah... I’ll make it delicious!"

When the MC arrives home and enters his room, he’s greeted by Asmodeus and notices that Imai is there too.

Asmodeus: "Welcome home."
MC: "You were at home…? ...HUH!?"
Imai: "…Hi."
Asmodeus: "I picked her up."
MC: "Picked up…"
Asmodeus: "In human words… It would be like 'A micropenis about to cum.'"
MC: "…In other words, something useless. Of no importance."
Asmodeus: "You could say yes. I was allowed to take a look at this girl’s memories… But the crucial parts had been erased."
MC: "The crucial parts?"
Asmodeus: "The demon and its contract bearer. All I could deduce… was that they were insignificant nobodies. A waste of time."
MC: "SO, WHAT DOES ALL THAT HAVE TO DO WITH WHAT YOU "PICKED UP"!?"
Asmodeus: "We couldn’t get either Azusa-chan or Asuka-chan to fall for you… Isn’t a zero result pretty disappointing? Besides, this girl is the one who hurt your girlfriend. It’s simple… You have to make things clear to her."

The MC looks at Imai with a displeased expression while she avoids his gaze. He thinks, "This isn’t exactly a situation where I can just nod and agree. It’s true that this has made me really angry, and I feel like giving her a hard time… but why does she accept it without questioning anything?"

Asmodeus hugs Imai from behind and starts to play with her tits.

Asmodeus: "You don’t seem very convinced… But I’m not forcing her, you know? This young lady has her own reasons."
MC: "What… reasons?"
Asmodeus: "It’s simple, this person’s libido and sexual sensations have increased. Her body has become unable to go days without sex…"
Imai: "Mm... Hya..."

Asmodeus bites Imai’s ear while still playing with her tits.

Asmodeus: "The other reason is… that she hates Asuka-chan with all her heart and plans to steal her boyfriend. If she managed to win you over, wouldn’t that be enough revenge against Asuka-chan?"
Imai: "Mmm... Hya... Ahm..."
MC: "Huh… You’re underestimating me."

MC thinks, "But… if I can keep this woman under control, Asuka will be safe. It hurts that things are going the way Asmodeus wants, but…"

MC: "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES. I’LL PLEASE YOU."

Imai gets naked, kneels down, and starts giving the MC a blowjob.

MC: "COME ON… SUCK IT."
Imai: "Mmm! Mmm... Hahm... Hmn... Mmm..."

The MC thinks, "Looks like this increase in sexual desire is real after all. Well then…"" Then he gets rough and starts throat-fucking Imai. He cums, making her choke.

Imai: "MMM! AHM! MMM!"
MC: "Now, suck it properly!"
Imai: "MM-MPH... MMM... MMM... INNGH! INNG-GHH!"
MC: "UGH!"
Imai: "NN-GH!? Guh... Cof Cof cof... Ugh..."

MC then fucks Imai while Asmodeus watches, pleased.

MC: "Do you think you can win me over… with that?"
Imai: "Haa haa… Fuck me…"
MC: "SHUT UP!"
Imai: "AAA-AAAHHH-HHHH! AAA-AHHH-AHM! AH… I’LL BE YOURS! I’LL BE YOURS! MORE!"
MC: "I DON’T NEED YOU! NOT SOMEONE LIKE YOU!"
Imai: "AH! CRUEL! VERY CRUEL, BUT… GOOD! IT FEELS GOOD! IT FEELS GOOOOD! AHH!"
Imai: "UAA-AAAAH-HH!"

They both cum, and the chapter ends.


Insight:

Gooner chapter.


Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

I don’t know the team members’ names, but their avatars are bears in bear pajamas, so I’ll be referring to them by the color of their pajamas.

Chapter 58

Team conversation about the chapter

0LscMMH.png


Blue bear: And it’s hard to believe that Chiaki isn’t brainwashed or doesn’t have a tragic past, she’s just like that.
Black bear: LEAVE HER ALONE, SHE’S THE ONLY HAG WHO’S HAPPY IN THIS MANGA; THE ONE WITH THE BLOND BROKE DOWN.
White bear: So, does that mean they’re going to rape/castrate/mistreat/slit/amp-?
Blue bear: If you sum it up as problems for the blond, yep.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 58.
Peace before the storm? Friend, wake up.
For now, there’s nothing worth noting except Asmodeus’ Plan 2 and who the “Waifu-Kicker” really is, enough for the cops to be worried.
And then there’s the demon… This author really loves the “Mystery Box” thing to the point it gets tiring.

Chapter 59

Team conversation about the chapter

zYl5AK4.png


Blue bear: So, another excuse for more chapters of just sex?
Black bear: "ACTUALLY, SHE’S A VALUABLE ASSET FOR THE EVIL STRATEGIC DIABOLIC PLAN OF-"
White bear: This should’ve ended several chapters ago.
Blue bear: Yep, now all that’s left is for the other demon to be a MILF or illegal.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 59.
It’s strange that the only good thing in this chapter was Chiaki’s smile…
Looks like the protagonist has another “I do it for revenge, not because I like her in any way” for his harem. Will it at least be relevant to the story? Or will it be another human wallet like Hina?
Well, the author will know… Supposedly… At least…
 
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Welp, here’s Chapter 59, and I’ve added the Spanish team’s comments on Chapters 58 and 59 as bonus content.

FYI, Chapter 58 was titled 'Concerns.'

Chapter 59 - Miwa Imai

The chapter opens with the MC leaving Chiaki after banging her in the apartment.

Chiaki: "Are you leaving already..?"
MC: "Yeah... I’ll be back tonight."
Chiaki: "...Huh?"
MC: "I don’t dislike curry."
Chiaki: "Yeah... I’ll make it delicious!"

When the MC arrives home and enters his room, he’s greeted by Asmodeus and notices that Imai is there too.

Asmodeus: "Welcome home."
MC: "You were at home…? ...HUH!?"
Imai: "…Hi."
Asmodeus: "I picked her up."
MC: "Picked up…"
Asmodeus: "In human words… It would be like 'A micropenis about to cum.'"
MC: "…In other words, something useless. Of no importance."
Asmodeus: "You could say yes. I was allowed to take a look at this girl’s memories… But the crucial parts had been erased."
MC: "The crucial parts?"
Asmodeus: "The demon and its contract bearer. All I could deduce… was that they were insignificant nobodies. A waste of time."
MC: "SO, WHAT DOES ALL THAT HAVE TO DO WITH WHAT YOU "PICKED UP"!?"
Asmodeus: "We couldn’t get either Azusa-chan or Asuka-chan to fall for you… Isn’t a zero result pretty disappointing? Besides, this girl is the one who hurt your girlfriend. It’s simple… You have to make things clear to her."

The MC looks at Imai with a displeased expression while she avoids his gaze. He thinks, "This isn’t exactly a situation where I can just nod and agree. It’s true that this has made me really angry, and I feel like giving her a hard time… but why does she accept it without questioning anything?"

Asmodeus hugs Imai from behind and starts to play with her tits.

Asmodeus: "You don’t seem very convinced… But I’m not forcing her, you know? This young lady has her own reasons."
MC: "What… reasons?"
Asmodeus: "It’s simple, this person’s libido and sexual sensations have increased. Her body has become unable to go days without sex…"
Imai: "Mm... Hya..."

Asmodeus bites Imai’s ear while still playing with her tits.

Asmodeus: "The other reason is… that she hates Asuka-chan with all her heart and plans to steal her boyfriend. If she managed to win you over, wouldn’t that be enough revenge against Asuka-chan?"
Imai: "Mmm... Hya... Ahm..."
MC: "Huh… You’re underestimating me."

MC thinks, "But… if I can keep this woman under control, Asuka will be safe. It hurts that things are going the way Asmodeus wants, but…"

MC: "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES. I’LL PLEASE YOU."

Imai gets naked, kneels down, and starts giving the MC a blowjob.

MC: "COME ON… SUCK IT."
Imai: "Mmm! Mmm... Hahm... Hmn... Mmm..."

The MC thinks, "Looks like this increase in sexual desire is real after all. Well then…"" Then he gets rough and starts throat-fucking Imai. He cums, making her choke.

Imai: "MMM! AHM! MMM!"
MC: "Now, suck it properly!"
Imai: "MM-MPH... MMM... MMM... INNGH! INNG-GHH!"
MC: "UGH!"
Imai: "NN-GH!? Guh... Cof Cof cof... Ugh..."

MC then fucks Imai while Asmodeus watches, pleased.

MC: "Do you think you can win me over… with that?"
Imai: "Haa haa… Fuck me…"
MC: "SHUT UP!"
Imai: "AAA-AAAHHH-HHHH! AAA-AHHH-AHM! AH… I’LL BE YOURS! I’LL BE YOURS! MORE!"
MC: "I DON’T NEED YOU! NOT SOMEONE LIKE YOU!"
Imai: "AH! CRUEL! VERY CRUEL, BUT… GOOD! IT FEELS GOOD! IT FEELS GOOOOD! AHH!"
Imai: "UAA-AAAAH-HH!"

They both cum, and the chapter ends.


Insight:

Gooner chapter.


Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

I don’t know the team members’ names, but their avatars are bears in bear pajamas, so I’ll be referring to them by the color of their pajamas.

Chapter 58

Team conversation about the chapter

0LscMMH.png


Blue bear: And it’s hard to believe that Chiaki isn’t brainwashed or doesn’t have a tragic past, she’s just like that.
Black bear: LEAVE HER ALONE, SHE’S THE ONLY HAG WHO’S HAPPY IN THIS MANGA; THE ONE WITH THE BLOND BROKE DOWN.
White bear: So, does that mean they’re going to rape/castrate/mistreat/slit/amp-?
Blue bear: If you sum it up as problems for the blond, yep.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 58.
Peace before the storm? Friend, wake up.
For now, there’s nothing worth noting except Asmodeus’ Plan 2 and who the “Waifu-Kicker” really is, enough for the cops to be worried.
And then there’s the demon… This author really loves the “Mystery Box” thing to the point it gets tiring.

Chapter 59

Team conversation about the chapter

zYl5AK4.png


Blue bear: So, another excuse for more chapters of just sex?
Black bear: "ACTUALLY, SHE’S A VALUABLE ASSET FOR THE EVIL STRATEGIC DIABOLIC PLAN OF-"
White bear: This would’ve ended several chapters ago.
Blue bear: Yep, now all that’s left is for the other demon to be a MILF or illegal.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 59.
It’s strange that the only good thing in this chapter was Chiaki’s smile…
Looks like the protagonist has another “I do it for revenge, not because I like her in any way” for his harem. Will it at least be relevant to the story? Or will it be another human wallet like Hina?
Well, the author will know… Supposedly… At least…
Man the spanish team always crack me up, they do not pull their punches even though they are the ones TL it, unlike some english TL who seem to treat the stuff they TL as if they fucking wrote and drew it themselves and need to defend it to the death no matter what.
 
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Welp, here’s Chapter 59, and I’ve added the Spanish team’s comments on Chapters 58 and 59 as bonus content.

FYI, Chapter 58 was titled 'Concerns.'

Chapter 59 - Miwa Imai

The chapter opens with the MC leaving Chiaki after banging her in the apartment.

Chiaki: "Are you leaving already..?"
MC: "Yeah... I’ll be back tonight."
Chiaki: "...Huh?"
MC: "I don’t dislike curry."
Chiaki: "Yeah... I’ll make it delicious!"

When the MC arrives home and enters his room, he’s greeted by Asmodeus and notices that Imai is there too.

Asmodeus: "Welcome home."
MC: "You were at home…? ...HUH!?"
Imai: "…Hi."
Asmodeus: "I picked her up."
MC: "Picked up…"
Asmodeus: "In human words… It would be like 'A micropenis about to cum.'"
MC: "…In other words, something useless. Of no importance."
Asmodeus: "You could say yes. I was allowed to take a look at this girl’s memories… But the crucial parts had been erased."
MC: "The crucial parts?"
Asmodeus: "The demon and its contract bearer. All I could deduce… was that they were insignificant nobodies. A waste of time."
MC: "SO, WHAT DOES ALL THAT HAVE TO DO WITH WHAT YOU "PICKED UP"!?"
Asmodeus: "We couldn’t get either Azusa-chan or Asuka-chan to fall for you… Isn’t a zero result pretty disappointing? Besides, this girl is the one who hurt your girlfriend. It’s simple… You have to make things clear to her."

The MC looks at Imai with a displeased expression while she avoids his gaze. He thinks, "This isn’t exactly a situation where I can just nod and agree. It’s true that this has made me really angry, and I feel like giving her a hard time… but why does she accept it without questioning anything?"

Asmodeus hugs Imai from behind and starts to play with her tits.

Asmodeus: "You don’t seem very convinced… But I’m not forcing her, you know? This young lady has her own reasons."
MC: "What… reasons?"
Asmodeus: "It’s simple, this person’s libido and sexual sensations have increased. Her body has become unable to go days without sex…"
Imai: "Mm... Hya..."

Asmodeus bites Imai’s ear while still playing with her tits.

Asmodeus: "The other reason is… that she hates Asuka-chan with all her heart and plans to steal her boyfriend. If she managed to win you over, wouldn’t that be enough revenge against Asuka-chan?"
Imai: "Mmm... Hya... Ahm..."
MC: "Huh… You’re underestimating me."

MC thinks, "But… if I can keep this woman under control, Asuka will be safe. It hurts that things are going the way Asmodeus wants, but…"

MC: "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES. I’LL PLEASE YOU."

Imai gets naked, kneels down, and starts giving the MC a blowjob.

MC: "COME ON… SUCK IT."
Imai: "Mmm! Mmm... Hahm... Hmn... Mmm..."

The MC thinks, "Looks like this increase in sexual desire is real after all. Well then…"" Then he gets rough and starts throat-fucking Imai. He cums, making her choke.

Imai: "MMM! AHM! MMM!"
MC: "Now, suck it properly!"
Imai: "MM-MPH... MMM... MMM... INNGH! INNG-GHH!"
MC: "UGH!"
Imai: "NN-GH!? Guh... Cof Cof cof... Ugh..."

MC then fucks Imai while Asmodeus watches, pleased.

MC: "Do you think you can win me over… with that?"
Imai: "Haa haa… Fuck me…"
MC: "SHUT UP!"
Imai: "AAA-AAAHHH-HHHH! AAA-AHHH-AHM! AH… I’LL BE YOURS! I’LL BE YOURS! MORE!"
MC: "I DON’T NEED YOU! NOT SOMEONE LIKE YOU!"
Imai: "AH! CRUEL! VERY CRUEL, BUT… GOOD! IT FEELS GOOD! IT FEELS GOOOOD! AHH!"
Imai: "UAA-AAAAH-HH!"

They both cum, and the chapter ends.


Insight:

Gooner chapter.


Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

I don’t know the team members’ names, but their avatars are bears in bear pajamas, so I’ll be referring to them by the color of their pajamas.

Chapter 58

Team conversation about the chapter

0LscMMH.png


Blue bear: And it’s hard to believe that Chiaki isn’t brainwashed or doesn’t have a tragic past, she’s just like that.
Black bear: LEAVE HER ALONE, SHE’S THE ONLY HAG WHO’S HAPPY IN THIS MANGA; THE ONE WITH THE BLOND BROKE DOWN.
White bear: So, does that mean they’re going to rape/castrate/mistreat/slit/amp-?
Blue bear: If you sum it up as problems for the blond, yep.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 58.
Peace before the storm? Friend, wake up.
For now, there’s nothing worth noting except Asmodeus’ Plan 2 and who the “Waifu-Kicker” really is, enough for the cops to be worried.
And then there’s the demon… This author really loves the “Mystery Box” thing to the point it gets tiring.

Chapter 59

Team conversation about the chapter

zYl5AK4.png


Blue bear: So, another excuse for more chapters of just sex?
Black bear: "ACTUALLY, SHE’S A VALUABLE ASSET FOR THE EVIL STRATEGIC DIABOLIC PLAN OF-"
White bear: This would’ve ended several chapters ago.
Blue bear: Yep, now all that’s left is for the other demon to be a MILF or illegal.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 59.
It’s strange that the only good thing in this chapter was Chiaki’s smile…
Looks like the protagonist has another “I do it for revenge, not because I like her in any way” for his harem. Will it at least be relevant to the story? Or will it be another human wallet like Hina?
Well, the author will know… Supposedly… At least…

This chapter feel so strange. You think you'll get a bit of info but it has been erased from Imai (how convenient. Not even a trace to feed the plot. I hate we get another long ass plot with a secret that will rock your world) but is a eta filler.

The mc, I love how he accept to be played again by Asmodeus rule because he can keep Asuka safe.
But bro, what about your CF, Azusa. Like, she has disappeared again after the plan that failed to save her. Aside a neutral note on her in 58, he didn't feel worried. Poor girl, reduced to a plot device and just to show how cruel are the antagonists.

And...oh well, time to fuck another harem candidate (with how her mind is broken, zero use in the future aside sex).
 
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Welp, here’s Chapter 59, and I’ve added the Spanish team’s comments on Chapters 58 and 59 as bonus content.

FYI, Chapter 58 was titled 'Concerns.'

Chapter 59 - Miwa Imai

The chapter opens with the MC leaving Chiaki after banging her in the apartment.

Chiaki: "Are you leaving already..?"
MC: "Yeah... I’ll be back tonight."
Chiaki: "...Huh?"
MC: "I don’t dislike curry."
Chiaki: "Yeah... I’ll make it delicious!"

When the MC arrives home and enters his room, he’s greeted by Asmodeus and notices that Imai is there too.

Asmodeus: "Welcome home."
MC: "You were at home…? ...HUH!?"
Imai: "…Hi."
Asmodeus: "I picked her up."
MC: "Picked up…"
Asmodeus: "In human words… It would be like 'A micropenis about to cum.'"
MC: "…In other words, something useless. Of no importance."
Asmodeus: "You could say yes. I was allowed to take a look at this girl’s memories… But the crucial parts had been erased."
MC: "The crucial parts?"
Asmodeus: "The demon and its contract bearer. All I could deduce… was that they were insignificant nobodies. A waste of time."
MC: "SO, WHAT DOES ALL THAT HAVE TO DO WITH WHAT YOU "PICKED UP"!?"
Asmodeus: "We couldn’t get either Azusa-chan or Asuka-chan to fall for you… Isn’t a zero result pretty disappointing? Besides, this girl is the one who hurt your girlfriend. It’s simple… You have to make things clear to her."

The MC looks at Imai with a displeased expression while she avoids his gaze. He thinks, "This isn’t exactly a situation where I can just nod and agree. It’s true that this has made me really angry, and I feel like giving her a hard time… but why does she accept it without questioning anything?"

Asmodeus hugs Imai from behind and starts to play with her tits.

Asmodeus: "You don’t seem very convinced… But I’m not forcing her, you know? This young lady has her own reasons."
MC: "What… reasons?"
Asmodeus: "It’s simple, this person’s libido and sexual sensations have increased. Her body has become unable to go days without sex…"
Imai: "Mm... Hya..."

Asmodeus bites Imai’s ear while still playing with her tits.

Asmodeus: "The other reason is… that she hates Asuka-chan with all her heart and plans to steal her boyfriend. If she managed to win you over, wouldn’t that be enough revenge against Asuka-chan?"
Imai: "Mmm... Hya... Ahm..."
MC: "Huh… You’re underestimating me."

MC thinks, "But… if I can keep this woman under control, Asuka will be safe. It hurts that things are going the way Asmodeus wants, but…"

MC: "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES. I’LL PLEASE YOU."

Imai gets naked, kneels down, and starts giving the MC a blowjob.

MC: "COME ON… SUCK IT."
Imai: "Mmm! Mmm... Hahm... Hmn... Mmm..."

The MC thinks, "Looks like this increase in sexual desire is real after all. Well then…"" Then he gets rough and starts throat-fucking Imai. He cums, making her choke.

Imai: "MMM! AHM! MMM!"
MC: "Now, suck it properly!"
Imai: "MM-MPH... MMM... MMM... INNGH! INNG-GHH!"
MC: "UGH!"
Imai: "NN-GH!? Guh... Cof Cof cof... Ugh..."

MC then fucks Imai while Asmodeus watches, pleased.

MC: "Do you think you can win me over… with that?"
Imai: "Haa haa… Fuck me…"
MC: "SHUT UP!"
Imai: "AAA-AAAHHH-HHHH! AAA-AHHH-AHM! AH… I’LL BE YOURS! I’LL BE YOURS! MORE!"
MC: "I DON’T NEED YOU! NOT SOMEONE LIKE YOU!"
Imai: "AH! CRUEL! VERY CRUEL, BUT… GOOD! IT FEELS GOOD! IT FEELS GOOOOD! AHH!"
Imai: "UAA-AAAAH-HH!"

They both cum, and the chapter ends.


Insight:

Gooner chapter.


Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

I don’t know the team members’ names, but their avatars are bears in bear pajamas, so I’ll be referring to them by the color of their pajamas.

Chapter 58

Team conversation about the chapter

0LscMMH.png


Blue bear: And it’s hard to believe that Chiaki isn’t brainwashed or doesn’t have a tragic past, she’s just like that.
Black bear: LEAVE HER ALONE, SHE’S THE ONLY HAG WHO’S HAPPY IN THIS MANGA; THE ONE WITH THE BLOND BROKE DOWN.
White bear: So, does that mean they’re going to rape/castrate/mistreat/slit/amp-?
Blue bear: If you sum it up as problems for the blond, yep.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 58.
Peace before the storm? Friend, wake up.
For now, there’s nothing worth noting except Asmodeus’ Plan 2 and who the “Waifu-Kicker” really is, enough for the cops to be worried.
And then there’s the demon… This author really loves the “Mystery Box” thing to the point it gets tiring.

Chapter 59

Team conversation about the chapter

zYl5AK4.png


Blue bear: So, another excuse for more chapters of just sex?
Black bear: "ACTUALLY, SHE’S A VALUABLE ASSET FOR THE EVIL STRATEGIC DIABOLIC PLAN OF-"
White bear: This would’ve ended several chapters ago.
Blue bear: Yep, now all that’s left is for the other demon to be a MILF or illegal.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 59.
It’s strange that the only good thing in this chapter was Chiaki’s smile…
Looks like the protagonist has another “I do it for revenge, not because I like her in any way” for his harem. Will it at least be relevant to the story? Or will it be another human wallet like Hina?
Well, the author will know… Supposedly… At least…

I fear the only way Azusa gets justice if Sakuraba happens to find it in the mouth or ass of a named female character.
 
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Welp, here’s Chapter 59, and I’ve added the Spanish team’s comments on Chapters 58 and 59 as bonus content.

FYI, Chapter 58 was titled 'Concerns.'

Chapter 59 - Miwa Imai

The chapter opens with the MC leaving Chiaki after banging her in the apartment.

Chiaki: "Are you leaving already..?"
MC: "Yeah... I’ll be back tonight."
Chiaki: "...Huh?"
MC: "I don’t dislike curry."
Chiaki: "Yeah... I’ll make it delicious!"

When the MC arrives home and enters his room, he’s greeted by Asmodeus and notices that Imai is there too.

Asmodeus: "Welcome home."
MC: "You were at home…? ...HUH!?"
Imai: "…Hi."
Asmodeus: "I picked her up."
MC: "Picked up…"
Asmodeus: "In human words… It would be like 'A micropenis about to cum.'"
MC: "…In other words, something useless. Of no importance."
Asmodeus: "You could say yes. I was allowed to take a look at this girl’s memories… But the crucial parts had been erased."
MC: "The crucial parts?"
Asmodeus: "The demon and its contract bearer. All I could deduce… was that they were insignificant nobodies. A waste of time."
MC: "SO, WHAT DOES ALL THAT HAVE TO DO WITH WHAT YOU "PICKED UP"!?"
Asmodeus: "We couldn’t get either Azusa-chan or Asuka-chan to fall for you… Isn’t a zero result pretty disappointing? Besides, this girl is the one who hurt your girlfriend. It’s simple… You have to make things clear to her."

The MC looks at Imai with a displeased expression while she avoids his gaze. He thinks, "This isn’t exactly a situation where I can just nod and agree. It’s true that this has made me really angry, and I feel like giving her a hard time… but why does she accept it without questioning anything?"

Asmodeus hugs Imai from behind and starts to play with her tits.

Asmodeus: "You don’t seem very convinced… But I’m not forcing her, you know? This young lady has her own reasons."
MC: "What… reasons?"
Asmodeus: "It’s simple, this person’s libido and sexual sensations have increased. Her body has become unable to go days without sex…"
Imai: "Mm... Hya..."

Asmodeus bites Imai’s ear while still playing with her tits.

Asmodeus: "The other reason is… that she hates Asuka-chan with all her heart and plans to steal her boyfriend. If she managed to win you over, wouldn’t that be enough revenge against Asuka-chan?"
Imai: "Mmm... Hya... Ahm..."
MC: "Huh… You’re underestimating me."

MC thinks, "But… if I can keep this woman under control, Asuka will be safe. It hurts that things are going the way Asmodeus wants, but…"

MC: "TAKE OFF YOUR CLOTHES. I’LL PLEASE YOU."

Imai gets naked, kneels down, and starts giving the MC a blowjob.

MC: "COME ON… SUCK IT."
Imai: "Mmm! Mmm... Hahm... Hmn... Mmm..."

The MC thinks, "Looks like this increase in sexual desire is real after all. Well then…"" Then he gets rough and starts throat-fucking Imai. He cums, making her choke.

Imai: "MMM! AHM! MMM!"
MC: "Now, suck it properly!"
Imai: "MM-MPH... MMM... MMM... INNGH! INNG-GHH!"
MC: "UGH!"
Imai: "NN-GH!? Guh... Cof Cof cof... Ugh..."

MC then fucks Imai while Asmodeus watches, pleased.

MC: "Do you think you can win me over… with that?"
Imai: "Haa haa… Fuck me…"
MC: "SHUT UP!"
Imai: "AAA-AAAHHH-HHHH! AAA-AHHH-AHM! AH… I’LL BE YOURS! I’LL BE YOURS! MORE!"
MC: "I DON’T NEED YOU! NOT SOMEONE LIKE YOU!"
Imai: "AH! CRUEL! VERY CRUEL, BUT… GOOD! IT FEELS GOOD! IT FEELS GOOOOD! AHH!"
Imai: "UAA-AAAAH-HH!"

They both cum, and the chapter ends.


Insight:

Gooner chapter.


Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

I don’t know the team members’ names, but their avatars are bears in bear pajamas, so I’ll be referring to them by the color of their pajamas.

Chapter 58

Team conversation about the chapter

0LscMMH.png


Blue bear: And it’s hard to believe that Chiaki isn’t brainwashed or doesn’t have a tragic past, she’s just like that.
Black bear: LEAVE HER ALONE, SHE’S THE ONLY HAG WHO’S HAPPY IN THIS MANGA; THE ONE WITH THE BLOND BROKE DOWN.
White bear: So, does that mean they’re going to rape/castrate/mistreat/slit/amp-?
Blue bear: If you sum it up as problems for the blond, yep.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 58.
Peace before the storm? Friend, wake up.
For now, there’s nothing worth noting except Asmodeus’ Plan 2 and who the “Waifu-Kicker” really is, enough for the cops to be worried.
And then there’s the demon… This author really loves the “Mystery Box” thing to the point it gets tiring.

Chapter 59

Team conversation about the chapter

zYl5AK4.png


Blue bear: So, another excuse for more chapters of just sex?
Black bear: "ACTUALLY, SHE’S A VALUABLE ASSET FOR THE EVIL STRATEGIC DIABOLIC PLAN OF-"
White bear: This should’ve ended several chapters ago.
Blue bear: Yep, now all that’s left is for the other demon to be a MILF or illegal.

General take from the team

Alright, here’s NTRevenge Chapter 59.
It’s strange that the only good thing in this chapter was Chiaki’s smile…
Looks like the protagonist has another “I do it for revenge, not because I like her in any way” for his harem. Will it at least be relevant to the story? Or will it be another human wallet like Hina?
Well, the author will know… Supposedly… At least…
Like I said, they're gonna keep stringing Azusa along.

God, we know there's another demon now, they could've had its contractor be a revenge target and have a Kira vs L rivalry, but nah it has to be a bigger bad guy who now has possession of Azusa, who's further deeper into hell after seeing the one person she cares about seemingly forget her.

Shit plan leads to shit situation that leads to more shit planning.
 

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