NTREVENGE - Ch. 60

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Dunno… Considering everything Mitsuru did to Azusa (especially if you know what happens in the extra novel chapter from volume 4), the “revenge” on him feels totally underwhelming.

Also, it’s kind of weird that Toshi is being nice to Azusa, considering what he did to Imai. If we take into account what Sawada-sensei said about her being different from Imai, and the fact that she stated that she loves Toshi, maybe Asmodeus is totally mistaken in thinking she’s dealing with an inferior demon.


Sales info:

While promoting the release of volume 7 on X, the author mentioned that the manga had surpassed 250,000 copies sold (physical + digital). That’s impressive given how bad this manga is. However, Shoseki Ranking data shows that physical sales for volume 7, released on September 19, were weak. For the first time, it failed to make the weekly ranking in its debut week, which required sales of around 1,200 copies.

My best guess for this drop is that readers didn’t like the conclusion of the Mitsuru revenge arc and the baggage that came with it (another demon, etc.). Below is a graph showing first-week sales for all volumes.

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Note: volume 7 sold fewer than 1,200 copies, but since it didn’t chart, the exact number can’t be known. I’ve used 1,200 as an illustrative placeholder.

Thanks for the chapter!
Thanks for the chart info! This is exactly what I check to see if a manga is popular in the East. Are Vol.7 numbers this low just because it’s so new? I suspect it usually takes a few months to see total sales, since most fans buy the new release immediately, then it trickles in later.

About the revenge part being underwhelming: I agree 120%. From the comments I’ve seen, almost everyone feels the same. Honestly it was expected - how badly the story dragged, only picking up much later. By that point the damage was done. Even if the revenge had been satisfying, it wouldn’t have saved it.

This might explain why the MC suddenly got another sex slave - a character who would normally just appear for 2–3 scenes and disappear -suddenly given to him (or maybe to the reader?) as a sort of compensation for the way the revenge plot was handled. That’s how I read the chapter when the MC asked the Demon girl about it.

It’s something, but really it’s so late. She’s still was being used and while she’s a side chick and not on the same page as a childhood friend, or a chick the douches was aiming at, its still meh. It’s kind of laughable how this new girl turned into a fuck shmeat for the MC who can apparently only be satisfied by him now. Beggars can’t be choosers, I guess. Seems like she might still be targeted later, possibly by the teacher, based on how the childhood friend is warming up to the new guy.

And if that’s true, it’s basically going from one burning dumpster to a fresh one. But if sales drop because of the weak revenge, I doubt the author would end the childhood friend with the new guy - though I wouldn’t mind, since she’s damaged enough and doesn’t really need to stick around. Since the whole mess started because of her, it makes sense she’d still be in love with MC but written off by the story’s end.

My prediction: until the big bulky antagonist appears, the story will likely focus on the teacher using the new guy to influence the childhood friend, either making her fall for him or get used, reigniting the “revenge” plot against the teacher and new guy.

I agree with the commenter who said this should have ended with the blonde guy getting arrested. The author seems to think they can milk it if fans keep buying, but the childhood friend keeps being used as a pawn for revenge. Honestly the author seems obsessed with cuckold scenarios, so this is probably the “best” plot they could come up with to statify the readers who arnt into it and tries to play both ways. I’ve seen better revenge arcs, sexual or not and since this hasn’t even hit the lowest bar, it seems it’ll continue to be this low.

Also I could misinterpreted things since I ignored the manga since around chapter 4 I believe, only checking it out today around chapters 52–60 when the revenge part concluded. I read these in one sitting in under 10 minutes. The chapters are ridiculously short; it could’ve been condensed into 2 chapters.
 
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Thanks for the chart info! This is exactly what I check to see if a manga is popular in the East. Are Vol.7 numbers this low just because it’s so new? I suspect it usually takes a few months to see total sales, since most fans buy the new release immediately, then it trickles in later.
Shoseki Ranking only tracks physical copy sales and only for the top 500 best-selling manga. It has daily, weekly, and monthly rankings. Daily rankings don’t let us estimate how many copies were sold; only weekly and monthly rankings do.

For volume 7 of NTREVENGE, it didn’t reach the weekly ranking in its first week. This manga’s volumes usually appear in the weekly ranking during their first week and then drop off as sales become too low to track. Volume 7 only showed up in three daily rankings, which doesn’t provide data to estimate how many copies were sold in those three days.

What we do know is that reaching the weekly ranking in the release week required about 1,200 copies sold. Since volume 7 didn’t appear in the weekly ranking, it sold fewer than 1,200 copies.
 
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Asmodeus is the shittiest demon of revenge that any revenger had the misfortune to deal with.
She don't care about his revenge, she don't care about who he want to protect, she don't care about proper retribution, she just want to schlick to her NTR fetish.

Wonder if we’ll see if she’s worked with anyone in the past or if this is literally her “first job” lol

Tho yeah not the best to read if you wanna see revenge

Confinement king is better (tho not by much), the demon girl there seems to be more “on his side” for that mc
 
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What we do know is that reaching the weekly ranking in the release week required about 1,200 copies sold. Since volume 7 didn’t appear in the weekly ranking, it sold fewer than 1,200 copies.
Well I will be damned if even the japanese stopped caring about it after the weak revenge was concluded. Do you know which chapter were in Vol7? I have this feeling that the douches arrest was the last chapter of that volume and the last two chapters are the ongoing volume, are these which try to indirect tell the reader they acknowledged the revenge is but and give us the fanservice with that new chick as a apolgy.

I really would like to know what its fans really think about it, I mean the japanse ones since they are the ones who support and buy it which affects if it will be continued or axed.
 
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Well I will be damned if even the japanese stopped caring about it after the weak revenge was concluded. Do you know which chapter were in Vol7? I have this feeling that the douches arrest was the last chapter of that volume and the last two chapters are the ongoing volume, are these which try to indirect tell the reader they acknowledged the revenge is but and give us the fanservice with that new chick as a apolgy.
Since volume 6 contains chapters 40–48, volume 7 should contain chapters 49–57.

I really would like to know what its fans really think about it, I mean the japanse ones since they are the ones who support and buy it which affects if it will be continued or axed.
Same here, but as far as I know, it’s not being published anywhere that has a comments section.
 
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Chapter 61 - New Harem System

The chapter opens with the MC having sex with his harem: Hina, Chiaki (Sekido), and Imai. It’s been a week since Mitsuru’s arrest.

As Hina rides the MC, he thinks about what just happened.

Hina: "AHHH..."

The MC Thinks, "A week has passed since then. The Takeshige case has only been reported as that of an 18-year-old guy, and his name has been kept from the public. The school hasn’t made it public either. At least, for now… but…"

There’s a picture of a newspaper with the headline:

Sexual assault on a girl
AN 18-YEAR-OLD YOUTH WAS ARRESTED
The police suspect that the crime may have been committed by a group. It is currently under investigation.

Hina: "AH… I’M CUMMING… AAH! I’M CUMMING!"

The MC Thinks, "Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"

Hina: "HYA! UGH! AH… I’M CUMMING! AAAAAH! HAA…"

The MC Thinks, "I was also questioned. But the detectives didn’t show up. They just warned me not to do anything dangerous."

After finishing with Hina, Chiaki and Imai compete over who will clean the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Sakuraba… I’m going to clean it up."
Imai: "CHI-NEE, YOU’RE CHEATING, ME TOO."
Chiaki: "DON’T BOTHER US!"

The MC thinks, "Imai Miwa adapted surprisingly well to Mizuno and Sekido. She treats them like older sisters and acts like a little sister. It seems they don’t mind it either."

Chiaki and Imai are sucking the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Mmm… Chuu…"
Imai: "Haa… Sakuraba-san… It’s amazing…"

The MC recalls something Imai once said to him: “Am I faking it? Of course I am. If I’m going to be with you for the rest of my life, I have to secure my own place, don’t I?”

The MC thinks, "I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing..."

Chiaki: "Sakuraba-kun… I can’t wait any longer."
Imai: "Me neither…"

Chiaki and Imai lie on the bed with their asses raised, saying in unison, “Put it in…”

MC: "Guh..."

The MC chooses to fuck Chiaki first.

Chiaki: "Aaahh! It’s in! Aaa-ahh!"
Imai: "Eh..."

While waiting her turn, Imai talks to Hina. They’re both sitting on the sofa.

Hina: "For someone who’s on standby, you look pretty happy. Did something good happen?"
Imai: "Ah… you noticed? Actually, thanks to that incident, my father told me that we should live together… "
Hina: "Huh? What do you mean?"
Imai: "My parents got divorced, and I… live with my grandfather and grandmother. My father told me that he wants me to go live with him."
Hina: "Ugh… I don’t want to bother talking about my life, so I’ll pass."
Imai: "But you’re the one who asked me, Hina-nee! Please listen to me until the end."
Chiaki: "AAAHM..."
Hina: "Look… it’s your turn now."
Imai: "Eh?"
Chiaki: "HYAAAAAH!!"

Scene change: Takuma and his girlfriend, Mizuho, are at a restaurant discussing what happened to Mitsuru. (Keep in mind, they’re the last remaining members of the group the MC plans to take revenge on.)

Takuma: "That guy… was caught raping a woman and arrested red-handed. On top of that, he apparently kept all the photos of the women he had slept with at home, and those were found too."
Mizuho: "Ugh... What an idiot. But... If you say that out of all of them, there would also be ones of Miku and the others, right?... Isn't that really bad?"
Takuma: "I asked my father’s secretary, Kishibe, to investigate. So far, there haven’t been any issues. Even so… Mitsuru was the only one who raped Miku."

Takuma thinks, "There’s no need to be afraid. It’s impossible for them to trace things that far to reach that case." As Takuma thinks this, an image of someone hanging by the neck appears in the background. It’s unclear whether it depicts a suicide caused by the group of bullies or some kind of murder cover-up.

Mizuho: "After Masataka, it was Mitsuru, right? Hina-chan and Chi-chan haven’t been getting along lately either… I don’t know how we ended up in this situation."
Takuma: "But… maybe it’s better if we talk to Hina and the others as soon as possible. And… with Sakuraba-kun too."
Mizuho: "Do you think he has the guts to snitch on us?"
Takuma: "Just in case, only just in case."

At the adjacent table, Akagi and Sawada-sensei are listening to the conversation. Akagi has a devilish smile.

Scene change: In prison, looking rough, Mitsuru is told by a jailer that he has a visitor.

Jailer: "Takeshige. You’ve got a visitor…"
Mitsuru: "...Eh?"


Insight:

Nothing much to say, but I remembered that in chapter 1, when a teaser of the MC’s harem was shown, Imai wasn’t in the image. So it seems to me that the plot with the other demon wasn’t part of the original plan and was likely thought up later to extend the story.

BNKAvb4.jpeg




Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

Team conversation about the chapter

Black Bear: HELL YEAH, NEW SLAVE AND NEW PLOT!
White Bear: …Does anyone else feel like this would have been the penultimate chapter if they hadn’t added all these shitty subplots?
Black Bear: ASK THE FANDOM OF RENT-A-GIRLFRIEND, THEY KNOW BETTER.
Blue Bear: sigh. Wake me up when something interesting happens.
Black Bear: HERE’S TO 100 CHAPTERS, BITCHES!

KMCMOP4.png


I believe there’s a Red Bear, and the White Bear is referring to what could happen to Mitsuru.

General take from the team

Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?
 
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Chapter 61 - New Harem System

The chapter opens with the MC having sex with his harem: Hina, Chiaki (Sekido), and Imai. It’s been a week since Mitsuru’s arrest.

As Hina rides the MC, he thinks about what just happened.

Hina: "AHHH..."

The MC Thinks, "A week has passed since then. The Takeshige case has only been reported as that of an 18-year-old guy, and his name has been kept from the public. The school hasn’t made it public either. At least, for now… but…"

There’s a picture of a newspaper with the headline:



Hina: "AH… I’M CUMMING… AAH! I’M CUMMING!"

The MC Thinks, "Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"

Hina: "HYA! UGH! AH… I’M CUMMING! AAAAAH! HAA…"

The MC Thinks, "I was also questioned. But the detectives didn’t show up. They just warned me not to do anything dangerous."

After finishing with Hina, Chiaki and Imai compete over who will clean the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Sakuraba… I’m going to clean it up."
Imai: "CHI-NEE, YOU’RE CHEATING, ME TOO."
Chiaki: "DON’T BOTHER US!"

The MC thinks, "Imai Miwa adapted surprisingly well to Mizuno and Sekido. She treats them like older sisters and acts like a little sister. It seems they don’t mind it either."

Chiaki and Imai are sucking the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Mmm… Chuu…"
Imai: "Haa… Sakuraba-san… It’s amazing…"

The MC recalls something Imai once said to him: “Am I faking it? Of course I am. If I’m going to be with you for the rest of my life, I have to secure my own place, don’t I?”

The MC thinks, "I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing..."

Chiaki: "Sakuraba-kun… I can’t wait any longer."
Imai: "Me neither…"

Chiaki and Imai lie on the bed with their asses raised, saying in unison, “Put it in…”

MC: "Guh..."

The MC chooses to fuck Chiaki first.

Chiaki: "Aaahh! It’s in! Aaa-ahh!"
Imai: "Eh..."

While waiting her turn, Imai talks to Hina. They’re both sitting on the sofa.

Hina: "For someone who’s on standby, you look pretty happy. Did something good happen?"
Imai: "Ah… you noticed? Actually, thanks to that incident, my father told me that we should live together… "
Hina: "Huh? What do you mean?"
Imai: "My parents got divorced, and I… live with my grandfather and grandmother. My father told me that he wants me to go live with him."
Hina: "Ugh… I don’t want to bother talking about my life, so I’ll pass."
Imai: "But you’re the one who asked me, Hina-nee! Please listen to me until the end."
Chiaki: "AAAHM..."
Hina: "Look… it’s your turn now."
Imai: "Eh?"
Chiaki: "HYAAAAAH!!"

Scene change: Takuma and his girlfriend, Mizuho, are at a restaurant discussing what happened to Mitsuru. (Keep in mind, they’re the last remaining members of the group the MC plans to take revenge on.)

Takuma: "That guy… was caught raping a woman and arrested red-handed. On top of that, he apparently kept all the photos of the women he had slept with at home, and those were found too."
Mizuho: "Ugh... What an idiot. But... If you say that out of all of them, there would also be ones of Miku and the others, right?... Isn't that really bad?"
Takuma: "I asked my father’s secretary, Kishibe, to investigate. So far, there haven’t been any issues. Even so… Mitsuru was the only one who raped Miku."

Takuma thinks, "There’s no need to be afraid. It’s impossible for them to trace things that far to reach that case." As Takuma thinks this, an image of someone hanging by the neck appears in the background. It’s unclear whether it depicts a suicide caused by the group of bullies or some kind of murder cover-up.

Mizuho: "After Masataka, it was Mitsuru, right? Hina-chan and Chi-chan haven’t been getting along lately either… I don’t know how we ended up in this situation."
Takuma: "But… maybe it’s better if we talk to Hina and the others as soon as possible. And… with Sakuraba-kun too."
Mizuho: "Do you think he has the guts to snitch on us?"
Takuma: "Just in case, only just in case."

At the adjacent table, Akagi and Sawada-sensei are listening to the conversation. Akagi has a devilish smile.

Scene change: In prison, looking rough, Mitsuru is told by a jailer that he has a visitor.

Jailer: "Takeshige. You’ve got a visitor…"
Mitsuru: "...Eh?"


Insight:

Nothing much to say, but I remembered that in chapter 1, when a teaser of the MC’s harem was shown, Imai wasn’t in the image. So it seems to me that the plot with the other demon wasn’t part of the original plan and was likely thought up later to extend the story.

BNKAvb4.jpeg




Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

Team conversation about the chapter

Black Bear: HELL YEAH, NEW SLAVE AND NEW PLOT!
White Bear: …Does anyone else feel like this would have been the penultimate chapter if they hadn’t added all these shitty subplots?
Black Bear: ASK THE FANDOM OF RENT-A-GIRLFRIEND, THEY KNOW BETTER.
Blue Bear: sigh. Wake me up when something interesting happens.
Black Bear: HERE’S TO 100 CHAPTERS, BITCHES!

KMCMOP4.png


I believe there’s a Red Bear, and the White Bear is referring to what could happen to Mitsuru.

General take from the team

Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?

At this point, what is driving the plot forward, nothing is resolved but nothing is really urgent either.
 
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Chapter 61 - New Harem System

The chapter opens with the MC having sex with his harem: Hina, Chiaki (Sekido), and Imai. It’s been a week since Mitsuru’s arrest.

As Hina rides the MC, he thinks about what just happened.

Hina: "AHHH..."

The MC Thinks, "A week has passed since then. The Takeshige case has only been reported as that of an 18-year-old guy, and his name has been kept from the public. The school hasn’t made it public either. At least, for now… but…"

There’s a picture of a newspaper with the headline:



Hina: "AH… I’M CUMMING… AAH! I’M CUMMING!"

The MC Thinks, "Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"

Hina: "HYA! UGH! AH… I’M CUMMING! AAAAAH! HAA…"

The MC Thinks, "I was also questioned. But the detectives didn’t show up. They just warned me not to do anything dangerous."

After finishing with Hina, Chiaki and Imai compete over who will clean the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Sakuraba… I’m going to clean it up."
Imai: "CHI-NEE, YOU’RE CHEATING, ME TOO."
Chiaki: "DON’T BOTHER US!"

The MC thinks, "Imai Miwa adapted surprisingly well to Mizuno and Sekido. She treats them like older sisters and acts like a little sister. It seems they don’t mind it either."

Chiaki and Imai are sucking the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Mmm… Chuu…"
Imai: "Haa… Sakuraba-san… It’s amazing…"

The MC recalls something Imai once said to him: “Am I faking it? Of course I am. If I’m going to be with you for the rest of my life, I have to secure my own place, don’t I?”

The MC thinks, "I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing..."

Chiaki: "Sakuraba-kun… I can’t wait any longer."
Imai: "Me neither…"

Chiaki and Imai lie on the bed with their asses raised, saying in unison, “Put it in…”

MC: "Guh..."

The MC chooses to fuck Chiaki first.

Chiaki: "Aaahh! It’s in! Aaa-ahh!"
Imai: "Eh..."

While waiting her turn, Imai talks to Hina. They’re both sitting on the sofa.

Hina: "For someone who’s on standby, you look pretty happy. Did something good happen?"
Imai: "Ah… you noticed? Actually, thanks to that incident, my father told me that we should live together… "
Hina: "Huh? What do you mean?"
Imai: "My parents got divorced, and I… live with my grandfather and grandmother. My father told me that he wants me to go live with him."
Hina: "Ugh… I don’t want to bother talking about my life, so I’ll pass."
Imai: "But you’re the one who asked me, Hina-nee! Please listen to me until the end."
Chiaki: "AAAHM..."
Hina: "Look… it’s your turn now."
Imai: "Eh?"
Chiaki: "HYAAAAAH!!"

Scene change: Takuma and his girlfriend, Mizuho, are at a restaurant discussing what happened to Mitsuru. (Keep in mind, they’re the last remaining members of the group the MC plans to take revenge on.)

Takuma: "That guy… was caught raping a woman and arrested red-handed. On top of that, he apparently kept all the photos of the women he had slept with at home, and those were found too."
Mizuho: "Ugh... What an idiot. But... If you say that out of all of them, there would also be ones of Miku and the others, right?... Isn't that really bad?"
Takuma: "I asked my father’s secretary, Kishibe, to investigate. So far, there haven’t been any issues. Even so… Mitsuru was the only one who raped Miku."

Takuma thinks, "There’s no need to be afraid. It’s impossible for them to trace things that far to reach that case." As Takuma thinks this, an image of someone hanging by the neck appears in the background. It’s unclear whether it depicts a suicide caused by the group of bullies or some kind of murder cover-up.

Mizuho: "After Masataka, it was Mitsuru, right? Hina-chan and Chi-chan haven’t been getting along lately either… I don’t know how we ended up in this situation."
Takuma: "But… maybe it’s better if we talk to Hina and the others as soon as possible. And… with Sakuraba-kun too."
Mizuho: "Do you think he has the guts to snitch on us?"
Takuma: "Just in case, only just in case."

At the adjacent table, Akagi and Sawada-sensei are listening to the conversation. Akagi has a devilish smile.

Scene change: In prison, looking rough, Mitsuru is told by a jailer that he has a visitor.

Jailer: "Takeshige. You’ve got a visitor…"
Mitsuru: "...Eh?"


Insight:

Nothing much to say, but I remembered that in chapter 1, when a teaser of the MC’s harem was shown, Imai wasn’t in the image. So it seems to me that the plot with the other demon wasn’t part of the original plan and was likely thought up later to extend the story.

BNKAvb4.jpeg




Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

Team conversation about the chapter

Black Bear: HELL YEAH, NEW SLAVE AND NEW PLOT!
White Bear: …Does anyone else feel like this would have been the penultimate chapter if they hadn’t added all these shitty subplots?
Black Bear: ASK THE FANDOM OF RENT-A-GIRLFRIEND, THEY KNOW BETTER.
Blue Bear: sigh. Wake me up when something interesting happens.
Black Bear: HERE’S TO 100 CHAPTERS, BITCHES!

KMCMOP4.png


I believe there’s a Red Bear, and the White Bear is referring to what could happen to Mitsuru.

General take from the team

Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?
I can just imagine you trying to write "AAHN! I'M CUMMING!!!" with a straight face.
 
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Chapter 61 - New Harem System

The chapter opens with the MC having sex with his harem: Hina, Chiaki (Sekido), and Imai. It’s been a week since Mitsuru’s arrest.

As Hina rides the MC, he thinks about what just happened.

Hina: "AHHH..."

The MC Thinks, "A week has passed since then. The Takeshige case has only been reported as that of an 18-year-old guy, and his name has been kept from the public. The school hasn’t made it public either. At least, for now… but…"

There’s a picture of a newspaper with the headline:



Hina: "AH… I’M CUMMING… AAH! I’M CUMMING!"

The MC Thinks, "Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"

Hina: "HYA! UGH! AH… I’M CUMMING! AAAAAH! HAA…"

The MC Thinks, "I was also questioned. But the detectives didn’t show up. They just warned me not to do anything dangerous."

After finishing with Hina, Chiaki and Imai compete over who will clean the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Sakuraba… I’m going to clean it up."
Imai: "CHI-NEE, YOU’RE CHEATING, ME TOO."
Chiaki: "DON’T BOTHER US!"

The MC thinks, "Imai Miwa adapted surprisingly well to Mizuno and Sekido. She treats them like older sisters and acts like a little sister. It seems they don’t mind it either."

Chiaki and Imai are sucking the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Mmm… Chuu…"
Imai: "Haa… Sakuraba-san… It’s amazing…"

The MC recalls something Imai once said to him: “Am I faking it? Of course I am. If I’m going to be with you for the rest of my life, I have to secure my own place, don’t I?”

The MC thinks, "I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing..."

Chiaki: "Sakuraba-kun… I can’t wait any longer."
Imai: "Me neither…"

Chiaki and Imai lie on the bed with their asses raised, saying in unison, “Put it in…”

MC: "Guh..."

The MC chooses to fuck Chiaki first.

Chiaki: "Aaahh! It’s in! Aaa-ahh!"
Imai: "Eh..."

While waiting her turn, Imai talks to Hina. They’re both sitting on the sofa.

Hina: "For someone who’s on standby, you look pretty happy. Did something good happen?"
Imai: "Ah… you noticed? Actually, thanks to that incident, my father told me that we should live together… "
Hina: "Huh? What do you mean?"
Imai: "My parents got divorced, and I… live with my grandfather and grandmother. My father told me that he wants me to go live with him."
Hina: "Ugh… I don’t want to bother talking about my life, so I’ll pass."
Imai: "But you’re the one who asked me, Hina-nee! Please listen to me until the end."
Chiaki: "AAAHM..."
Hina: "Look… it’s your turn now."
Imai: "Eh?"
Chiaki: "HYAAAAAH!!"

Scene change: Takuma and his girlfriend, Mizuho, are at a restaurant discussing what happened to Mitsuru. (Keep in mind, they’re the last remaining members of the group the MC plans to take revenge on.)

Takuma: "That guy… was caught raping a woman and arrested red-handed. On top of that, he apparently kept all the photos of the women he had slept with at home, and those were found too."
Mizuho: "Ugh... What an idiot. But... If you say that out of all of them, there would also be ones of Miku and the others, right?... Isn't that really bad?"
Takuma: "I asked my father’s secretary, Kishibe, to investigate. So far, there haven’t been any issues. Even so… Mitsuru was the only one who raped Miku."

Takuma thinks, "There’s no need to be afraid. It’s impossible for them to trace things that far to reach that case." As Takuma thinks this, an image of someone hanging by the neck appears in the background. It’s unclear whether it depicts a suicide caused by the group of bullies or some kind of murder cover-up.

Mizuho: "After Masataka, it was Mitsuru, right? Hina-chan and Chi-chan haven’t been getting along lately either… I don’t know how we ended up in this situation."
Takuma: "But… maybe it’s better if we talk to Hina and the others as soon as possible. And… with Sakuraba-kun too."
Mizuho: "Do you think he has the guts to snitch on us?"
Takuma: "Just in case, only just in case."

At the adjacent table, Akagi and Sawada-sensei are listening to the conversation. Akagi has a devilish smile.

Scene change: In prison, looking rough, Mitsuru is told by a jailer that he has a visitor.

Jailer: "Takeshige. You’ve got a visitor…"
Mitsuru: "...Eh?"


Insight:

Nothing much to say, but I remembered that in chapter 1, when a teaser of the MC’s harem was shown, Imai wasn’t in the image. So it seems to me that the plot with the other demon wasn’t part of the original plan and was likely thought up later to extend the story.

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Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

Team conversation about the chapter

Black Bear: HELL YEAH, NEW SLAVE AND NEW PLOT!
White Bear: …Does anyone else feel like this would have been the penultimate chapter if they hadn’t added all these shitty subplots?
Black Bear: ASK THE FANDOM OF RENT-A-GIRLFRIEND, THEY KNOW BETTER.
Blue Bear: sigh. Wake me up when something interesting happens.
Black Bear: HERE’S TO 100 CHAPTERS, BITCHES!

KMCMOP4.png


I believe there’s a Red Bear, and the White Bear is referring to what could happen to Mitsuru.

General take from the team

Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?
Author rn "I don't know what to write to keep this shit up. So more slave comedy battle around mc dick ! time for some sloppy second".
Good guess with the cover from chapter 1. I too bet that the story would have ended after the girls taken from the bullies. ah good old "oh I've more sale than predicted. Need to bs my way". This comedy

"Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"
hahahaha. Best cf ever, all I can say
 
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Chapter 61 - New Harem System

The chapter opens with the MC having sex with his harem: Hina, Chiaki (Sekido), and Imai. It’s been a week since Mitsuru’s arrest.

As Hina rides the MC, he thinks about what just happened.

Hina: "AHHH..."

The MC Thinks, "A week has passed since then. The Takeshige case has only been reported as that of an 18-year-old guy, and his name has been kept from the public. The school hasn’t made it public either. At least, for now… but…"

There’s a picture of a newspaper with the headline:



Hina: "AH… I’M CUMMING… AAH! I’M CUMMING!"

The MC Thinks, "Azusa’s parents probably already know what really happened to their daughter. But I have no idea what they’re doing right now. I can’t go ask them…"

Hina: "HYA! UGH! AH… I’M CUMMING! AAAAAH! HAA…"

The MC Thinks, "I was also questioned. But the detectives didn’t show up. They just warned me not to do anything dangerous."

After finishing with Hina, Chiaki and Imai compete over who will clean the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Sakuraba… I’m going to clean it up."
Imai: "CHI-NEE, YOU’RE CHEATING, ME TOO."
Chiaki: "DON’T BOTHER US!"

The MC thinks, "Imai Miwa adapted surprisingly well to Mizuno and Sekido. She treats them like older sisters and acts like a little sister. It seems they don’t mind it either."

Chiaki and Imai are sucking the MC’s dick.

Chiaki: "Mmm… Chuu…"
Imai: "Haa… Sakuraba-san… It’s amazing…"

The MC recalls something Imai once said to him: “Am I faking it? Of course I am. If I’m going to be with you for the rest of my life, I have to secure my own place, don’t I?”

The MC thinks, "I’m not sure if that’s a good thing or a bad thing..."

Chiaki: "Sakuraba-kun… I can’t wait any longer."
Imai: "Me neither…"

Chiaki and Imai lie on the bed with their asses raised, saying in unison, “Put it in…”

MC: "Guh..."

The MC chooses to fuck Chiaki first.

Chiaki: "Aaahh! It’s in! Aaa-ahh!"
Imai: "Eh..."

While waiting her turn, Imai talks to Hina. They’re both sitting on the sofa.

Hina: "For someone who’s on standby, you look pretty happy. Did something good happen?"
Imai: "Ah… you noticed? Actually, thanks to that incident, my father told me that we should live together… "
Hina: "Huh? What do you mean?"
Imai: "My parents got divorced, and I… live with my grandfather and grandmother. My father told me that he wants me to go live with him."
Hina: "Ugh… I don’t want to bother talking about my life, so I’ll pass."
Imai: "But you’re the one who asked me, Hina-nee! Please listen to me until the end."
Chiaki: "AAAHM..."
Hina: "Look… it’s your turn now."
Imai: "Eh?"
Chiaki: "HYAAAAAH!!"

Scene change: Takuma and his girlfriend, Mizuho, are at a restaurant discussing what happened to Mitsuru. (Keep in mind, they’re the last remaining members of the group the MC plans to take revenge on.)

Takuma: "That guy… was caught raping a woman and arrested red-handed. On top of that, he apparently kept all the photos of the women he had slept with at home, and those were found too."
Mizuho: "Ugh... What an idiot. But... If you say that out of all of them, there would also be ones of Miku and the others, right?... Isn't that really bad?"
Takuma: "I asked my father’s secretary, Kishibe, to investigate. So far, there haven’t been any issues. Even so… Mitsuru was the only one who raped Miku."

Takuma thinks, "There’s no need to be afraid. It’s impossible for them to trace things that far to reach that case." As Takuma thinks this, an image of someone hanging by the neck appears in the background. It’s unclear whether it depicts a suicide caused by the group of bullies or some kind of murder cover-up.

Mizuho: "After Masataka, it was Mitsuru, right? Hina-chan and Chi-chan haven’t been getting along lately either… I don’t know how we ended up in this situation."
Takuma: "But… maybe it’s better if we talk to Hina and the others as soon as possible. And… with Sakuraba-kun too."
Mizuho: "Do you think he has the guts to snitch on us?"
Takuma: "Just in case, only just in case."

At the adjacent table, Akagi and Sawada-sensei are listening to the conversation. Akagi has a devilish smile.

Scene change: In prison, looking rough, Mitsuru is told by a jailer that he has a visitor.

Jailer: "Takeshige. You’ve got a visitor…"
Mitsuru: "...Eh?"


Insight:

Nothing much to say, but I remembered that in chapter 1, when a teaser of the MC’s harem was shown, Imai wasn’t in the image. So it seems to me that the plot with the other demon wasn’t part of the original plan and was likely thought up later to extend the story.

BNKAvb4.jpeg




Bonus content: Comments from the Spanish team, HsEnfermos

Team conversation about the chapter

Black Bear: HELL YEAH, NEW SLAVE AND NEW PLOT!
White Bear: …Does anyone else feel like this would have been the penultimate chapter if they hadn’t added all these shitty subplots?
Black Bear: ASK THE FANDOM OF RENT-A-GIRLFRIEND, THEY KNOW BETTER.
Blue Bear: sigh. Wake me up when something interesting happens.
Black Bear: HERE’S TO 100 CHAPTERS, BITCHES!

KMCMOP4.png


I believe there’s a Red Bear, and the White Bear is referring to what could happen to Mitsuru.

General take from the team

Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?
Thanks for adding, for the quick summary and your insight. I also think the story was changed to introduce this new girl and the whole “new demon” subplot + a fresh antagonist who (surprise, surprise) is after the same old childhood friend again yaaaawn

What I’m not sure about is why this change happened. Was it just to stretch or milk the series longer, or because the original “revenge” plot was weak and they needed something bigger to top it? Hope it will end soon, honestly is already going on for to long as it did.

This scan team summaries this whole debalce correct:
Hehe, here’s Chapter 61 of NTRevenge, you masochists.
The fight between Chiaki and Hina versus the new—? Ah, already resolved.
The evidence that will bring down to—? Ah, his daddy's secretary already covered everything up.
At least Azusa is fine—…Ah, right, we need an excuse for the protagonist to switch villains.
…Does anyone else feel like this "delicious" is losing its narrative sense?
 

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