Number One Beast Master - Ch. 3

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The AI looks fine but unfortunately the story has a bad flow.
 
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How tf was his broke ass able to evolve the wolf in 3 days? I think being denied entrance to a school just because you currently don't have a good familiar is BS especially if he has record breaking spirit energy.
 
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Skipping any type of growth the mc could have had to just “he is the strongest now” is quite simply bad writing.
 

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