Ogre Gun Smoke - OneShot

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The first thing I thought on pg 1 was the inside of that gauntlet looks like a colon. I wasn't really surprised with how they turned out. That said her booty was just right.
 
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Art and story were all over the place. The whore was regenerating and then she was a portal, the assassin was avenging kids and then killing everyone, the monster girl was protecting the evil douche but also was somewhat righteous, what?!
 
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Intentional or not, killing innocents in order to punish a bad guy makes u a bad guy too. Brue
 
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@plastic_sludge

Let me introduce you to the concept of "anti-hero." A guy who goes in with no backing of the law to kill the bad guys is never going to fit the standard definition of a "hero." If the cops busted in right after this whole bloodbath, the assassin dude isn't going to get a pat in the back, a blowjob in the parking lot, and a medal from the mayor afterward. He's going to get arrested, and get arrested for premeditated ("I will kill") first degree murder, ie. he's a "bad guy."

In the game talk you seem to be most familiar with, this was "fucking kill everyone" mission, not an escort mission or save the hostage mission. In the escort or save the hostage mission, if you kill the civvie, the mission fails and you gotta redo. But in the kill everyone mission, if a civvie dies, you get some points docked and don't get the 100% clear, but if you choose to continue on, you can.

So you're an anti-hero assassin, living in the shadows, doing things the regular cops cannot do, and you think you're going to have a 5 minute interview and a background check with everyone you see in the organ trader's hideout? Why? That's what a cop would do. Hell, that's what a cop would HAVE to do. They would have to get a warrant, set a perimeter, send in a negotiator, and have a nice slow and boring 72 hour siege until Papa hires a really high-powered lawyer who somehow gets the little brat off. Yeah, that's the chapter 2 of this manga. Exciting shit, huh? Can't wait to have that drawn and translated.

No, we want to read something where a flawed hero with a tragic back story rushes in and sprays bullet and teaches everyone inside that they should be more careful about who they hang around with, while NOT getting killed himself, which was probably why he didn't stop and ask anyone if they did anything bad recently. I mean, he was outnumbered like 100 to 1.

Hell, for that matter. What if other guys in that room was innocent too. What if that corpse in the corner was someone doing a part time work serving Hors d'oeuvre to these fancy assholes? He had dreams, man. He was going to graduate college and support his mom, dude. But no one cares because he didn't have a nice set of tits. See how stupid that sounds?

Author even set it up by having the brat talk off to the side, declaring his dastardly intent to use her as a meatshield. That's some cheesy foreshadowing shit. Subtle as a hammer. So the assassin busts in and he's got like maybe half a second to mark everyone and take'em all out in a spray of bullet, and the evil little shit of a brat pulls her over him at the last split second to save himself. You see, that's a literary device to make him look even more EVIL. You're supposed to see that and think. "Oh, man, when I thought he couldn't be any slimier, he does that..."

But you managed to go off on a tangent that somehow this was a "good guy" (hint: good guys don't go on an extra-judicial killing spree) who should have known in that split second that she was someone innocent (I mean, who else was innocent? What about Harry the floor cleaner dude who had to stay late to wipe up vomit?) in that den of depravity?

What are you, 10?
 
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@ThePaulBunyanTrophy

Ngl I was hoping for an argument but damn... What the heck did I just get myself into? You seem way too into this manga

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He did not get killed by the ogre because he is a righteous warrior... apparently. Which, as you have gone to great lengths to prove, he is not.

Checkmate😭



In the game talk you seem to be most familiar with,

I never said anything about games? At all?

Do you have a problem with gamers? What did they do to you?

What are you, 10?

Im an adult. It is not as exciting as it sounds. Especially in a comments section of a hentai manga. But eh... depends on the perspective.
 
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@plastic_sludge

LOL, so you just ignore the fact that he without any sort of authority or backing of the law mowed down few dozens of people? Legally, that's called murder. If you wanted to protect kids, and you went around shooting people you think did it, that would make you a murderer, even if they did run a Pull-a-Part shop for kids. That he did it doesn't make him a "good guy."

Secondly, what she said is what the readers are supposed to think of him, not the world, not the cops, and certainly not the law. Although one person who's rather dim on things apparently thinks he's a bad dude for not stopping a deathly outnumbered firefight in an evil organ trader's hideout to inquire about a girl's prior criminal history.

And it's not like she doesn't have an ULTERIOR motive for wanting him to live... If you don't know, I think that's your mommy's job to teach you once you hit the appropriate age.

I think your thought process would barely reach playing checkers and I don't think they have checkmate in checkers...
 

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