There's a part of me that really likes having the OG sound effects in Japanese. Including the SFX as small notes is more than adequate, in my personal opinion, and it kinda preserves the "manga-ness" of the original by not redrawing and translating every little thing.
Just my own 2.3 cents, but if it counts for anything--I very much like the way you handled it. If it's also less hassle/stress for you, then all the better in my book.
Very happy to see another chapter, especially as it was just Majime getting to pig out at the Occult Club's expense. Pretty sad that there'll be no more School Supernatural Spookiness anymore now that she's cleaned them out, but them's the breaks--and Suzu is safer this way anyway, which is the at least half the point for Majime.
Suzu remains adorable, and I am kind of excited seeing the cast expand. No clue if the two of them are gonna stick around (I feel like anything can happen with the supplementary cast in this story, and Majime will only save 'em if it seems like Suzu would be sad if they lost body parts), but "The Pool Finale" is suitably ominous and excitement-inducing so I look forward to 9.2
Thanks again for doing what you do. This series is always a pleasant surprise to see updated, so I am grateful you're keeping on with it.