Okiraku Ryoushu no Tanoshii Ryouchi Bouei ~Seisan-kei Majutsu de Na mo na Kimura wo Saikyou no Jousai Toshi ni~ - Vol. 3 Ch. 13.2

[MangaDex]

 

[AiRiNA]

I may sound rude but the english translation around the latest chapters could do more work. It feels too literal; as some phrases loses its subject which is common in Japanese but not in English, or it may be caused by word choice of the TL/PR...

 

[d0a93lbj1clvj]

Don't worry guys. As the boy says, just eat the delicious meat.

 

[Barrier-kun]

this chapter's translation is better than previous chapters' which are wonky..

 

[Demonxmusher]

I.. I can't.. this translation is so horrible that I'm willing to pay for your English study.
I'm just gonna stop reading from this chapter until God drop in an actual English Translators

 

[definitionofinsanity]

"They can let themselves buy such meat?" - I'm guessing you meant "Can they afford to buy such meat?". Because... this doesn't really work as a sentence in this context.

"Such a cutting ability it has?! I buy it too!" - "And it has such a cutting ability?! I'll buy it, too!"

"You also almost do not fell it in your hand" - "Feel it in your hand"

"If two people always trade along the same route, and organize themselves to sell weapons, they will soon reach our village." - ...You mean the village that they're already at? That they're going to be selling the weapons from and "soon reach the village" that they're in? I don't even know what the primary meaning of this should be in this context. Makes no sense.

 

[TehSDragon]

"They can let themselves buy such meat?" - I'm guessing you meant "Can they afford to buy such meat?". Because... this doesn't really work as a sentence in this context.

"Such a cutting ability it has?! I buy it too!" - "And it has such a cutting ability?! I'll buy it, too!"

"You also almost do not fell it in your hand" - "Feel it in your hand"

"If two people always trade along the same route, and organize themselves to sell weapons, they will soon reach our village." - ...You mean the village that they're already at? That they're going to be selling the weapons from and "soon reach the village" that they're in? I don't even know what the primary meaning of this should be in this context. Makes no sense.

ManhwaFreak, baby

 

[MyBuddySuperFly]

Yeah, I'm out too.
What's the point in continuing if you don't understand what the fuck it is they're even saying.

 

[sksk]

pg. 5: to think that this village had such precious materials!

pg. 6: did a 20 or 30 meter long armored lizard appear or something?!

pg. 7: Ah, if it's about the cart/wagons, we've already prepared it. ---- these are actually real (the next bubble) ------ you don't need to worry (about the long wait) since everyone is enjoying the delicious meat that doesn't last long.

pg. 9: No, you can just have it. it seems like despite being a merchant you're not hellbent on profits. .....that really helps. he saw through me. he's greater than the rumours (meaning there was rumours about MC being a nice person but seeing it in person, it's actually more than the rumours)

pg. 10: this is the least i can do for them. (as a form of respect)

pg. 12: a-absurd! it cut without even the slightest resistance. amazing right? and can you believe it, this is an iron sword. you can achieve such a feeling with iron!? I'm gonna buy this too! -----

pg. 14: the brothers were probably planning to have monopoly over the sales of the weapons... you two are too optimistic (or inexperienced)

pg. 15: basically he was saying if the brothers sold the weapons on the same route, people will eventually trace everything back to the villages and cut them out of the equation and just get it straight from the source. so if they just advertised it from the start, they'd be able to profit from each sale. they ask how? he says by setting up a shop in this village.

pg. 16: whether it be shopkeeper or peddler, whichever it is, it'll be possible as long as you employ people to run it.

 

[Ezlsnow]

I thought Van wouldn't sell the wooden blocks because he's the only one who can create/transmute them? Now he's selling high-quality equipment that only he can create. It would only become the village's profit for one generation unless his family could continuously birth children with creation magic with quality and mana pool on par or better than Van's.

Would be interesting if that leads to this manga's initial situation of a child not inheriting their family's main magic theme

 

[Seraphus]

STOP PAYING YOUR TRANSLATOR

START PAYING A PROOFREADER

 

[N2O]

The TL isn't doing this any favors, especially when the story is kind of "meh" to begin with. But I don't have anything else to read atm and I'm bored so whatever I guess