One Element - Oneshot

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Does virtually nothing to him

Compliments his song writing ability

Gets dumped

Cries to herself

Gets insulted in a hit song for basically no reason

Acts like nothing happened

Manga: This is a good ending.


I want some of whatever Author-San was smoking to write this.
 
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This sort of feels like half way to being good. It has a lot of potential and I can mostly see what the author was going for, but the execution just doesn't live up to that at all. The reader has to reach the actual meaning and "solution" on their own in a way that doesn't really feel satisfying, if they even reach it at all. It sort of feels like eating a hollow cake.
 
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Yeah a new Kasumi Yasuda translation. I hope that Denpa Seinen get's a comeback. This oneshot was .. interesting.
 
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Wow, amazing, the author managed to write a trash ending without even writing a proper ending or beginning to their story! That takes some real (lack of) skill!
 

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