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So the author knew that this was going to be the last chapter, used it to tease their visit to their mother, only to end the chapter right when it was about to happen.
Instead, the plot we got in this chapter just boils down to
"So you knew about our origins?"
"Yup."
On repeat.
Sure, there were other tidbits besides that, but it felt like a waste of time so the author wouldn't have to think about how the meeting between the siblings and their mother would play and then cram it into a single chapter.
Instead, the plot we got in this chapter just boils down to
"So you knew about our origins?"
"Yup."
On repeat.
Sure, there were other tidbits besides that, but it felt like a waste of time so the author wouldn't have to think about how the meeting between the siblings and their mother would play and then cram it into a single chapter.