Onii-chan Is Done For! - Vol. 3 Ch. 23 - Mahiro and the Fun Weekend

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As much as I dislike waifu2x, I agree with vytah here. Unlike with scans, it works decently well with digital art.

As for sfx typesetting, I like that the sfx are being translated and that they're using... at least some variety of appropriate fonts, but you can still improve there. For one, please stop using *asterisks*, they don't add any value and actually just look bad. Second, please rotate the text where appropriate. It looks really weird that every single bit of sfx is in a straight line when they probably weren't in the raws. Also, if you're using a particular font for off-bubble dialogue (seems like you used Felt), do not use that same font for sfx.

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Additionally, I don't know if you've noticed but most people have stopped doing these "ED" comments because nobody likes them. Please leave your jokes for the credits page.

Regardless, thanks for your releases.
 
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I notice that, I should back using Photoshop for editing. That's my forte
I use asterik for sfx because of bad habbit previously working on Indonesian scans group.
P.S. and Happy new year
 
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@Meijin I'm not feeling the jacket. Looks mismatched with a casual one-piece like that, and for that age. Looks more like an office dress jacket and why would you wear that loafing around home? Then again I can't claim to be an expert on Japanese fashion, so maybe that is In atm.
 
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@Aereus Remember that Mihari is picking out all of Mahiro's clothes these days. So it's not that Mahiro chose that for lazing around the house, but that Mihari chose it, and Mahiro then decided to laze around regardless of the clothes.
 
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Wait, 5x-8=-10 etc in first year of middle-school ?
Ugh, I don't find it wrong really but the standards between my country and this... wait, is it even true to begin with ?
 
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@Shyning Keep in mind Japanese middle school & high school are both only 3 grades instead of 4. Middle school's the equivalent of 7th - 9th grade because of that. I did algebra in 8th grade, so it's not that odd, at least in the US.
 
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@manabi won't ever get used to their 3 grades, always bothers me hearing/reading "middle-schoolers" doing space science, then I realize they wouldn't be middle-schoolers around here and there when people like you remind me of it :')
 
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living the best kind of cheat NEET life... no need to study or work hard.
 
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Honestly, I struggle to help my nieces with their homework.
Yup, I know what you mean. Some of the method & formulas that I learned no longer use nowadays. And some of the method is very confusing and have more steps.
 
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Don't be hasty there Onii-chan excelling too much and you'll skip grades and your cheat mode will disappear in a flash xD
 

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