@Tomoshibi
Now that i've reread this chapter, there are quite a few typos here and there. Could've used additional proofreading, tbh.
Come on, why did you just stand there and crying?!. Or: ...stand there and cry?! There is no way i can do that!! I'm too surprised and can't do anything! - was it really present tense in the raws? I guess, it's possible, but it kinda sounds weird in context. Wow, it sounds so real!! This is Train ASMR video from youtube video Aren't you androphobiac?! Actually, i realized that it's okay to think of him as my own child...
Inconsistent use of articles, mainly with "bad memory" and "good one".
Probably, should have used "perverted" (adjective) instead of "pervert" (noun).
@HYBRID_BEING yeah you're right i see that too, well my grammar is sucks afterall, i know what it means but I don't know how to interpret it well in English.,
I'll do better next chapter while learning.,