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If you’re going to be modern, at least make the setting properly. The plot isn’t much and the characters are even less. The art and OOPARTS are all I like.
It’s generic shounen trash.
Idiot walks into fight without calling teacher when he’s crippled. Idiot walks around with his eyes glued to the ground. Idiot doesn’t call cops and follows people who want to beat his ass. Idiot wins fight because of his OOPARTS but decides to walk around with his eyes glued to the ground again. No wonder he got into a traffic accident. This is a grade A dumbass. No situational awareness at all. He just wants to be strong and kick ass.
The museum didn’t have a guard? Why are the two women glued to the ground? Why didn’t a crowd form after loud noises and part of the museum blew open? So he inexplicably slips past everything with OOPARTS controlling? There are cameras! Cops should call him in for the incident, as the two women saw him.
There’s the dumbass bully squad who call for help when they get beat up. It’s so ridiculous. You get no attachment. The kid getting bullied doesn’t even have a close relationship to the idiot MC. MC just wants to play hero. No goals, no attachments, just, “Hey, I was top dog once, and now I have to deal with monsters and punks.” I think this is a first where the MC doesn’t have a scene with his family in the first few chapters.
Idiot walks into fight without calling teacher when he’s crippled. Idiot walks around with his eyes glued to the ground. Idiot doesn’t call cops and follows people who want to beat his ass. Idiot wins fight because of his OOPARTS but decides to walk around with his eyes glued to the ground again. No wonder he got into a traffic accident. This is a grade A dumbass. No situational awareness at all. He just wants to be strong and kick ass.
The museum didn’t have a guard? Why are the two women glued to the ground? Why didn’t a crowd form after loud noises and part of the museum blew open? So he inexplicably slips past everything with OOPARTS controlling? There are cameras! Cops should call him in for the incident, as the two women saw him.
There’s the dumbass bully squad who call for help when they get beat up. It’s so ridiculous. You get no attachment. The kid getting bullied doesn’t even have a close relationship to the idiot MC. MC just wants to play hero. No goals, no attachments, just, “Hey, I was top dog once, and now I have to deal with monsters and punks.” I think this is a first where the MC doesn’t have a scene with his family in the first few chapters.