Ore no Genjitsu wa Ren’ai Game??: ka to Omottara Inochigake no Game datta - Vol. 3 Ch. 9.2 - A Maze in the Night (1)

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Why didn't he win that one instantly?
I mean she revealed her wrongdoing the instant she showed up. The scumbag ordered chicken.
I suppose he still has to see her brought to justice.
Also the stand vendor. That scumbag was serving chicken, so they also need cleansing.
 
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Nah, you can't write shit like this and expect people to like it…
Plot twists only work when they're unexpected. Making your protagonist a complete, brainless cretin and forcing him to run into extremely obvious trouble won't create suspense and surprises, just annoyance.

What's next, making him constantly jump into a vat of acid, surprised that he dies every time?
 
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The what now :huh:
This guy needs 4 figure charm to rizz up anyone if that's all he can do at 60/70 (or whatever he's currently at).
The blade is honestly pretty op but it's a bit weird that the opponent perceives it as evading rather than blocking (both of which seemed pretty unrealistic in this case).
 

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