Ore no Ichizu o Jama Suru Aitsu - Ch. 4 - Time For Scents

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I didn't notice she kissed her finger where she put the lip balm on until I went back.

Page 5 is "in is sensei" instead of "in sensei"
 
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Man she is sooooo bad.... 💢💢💢💢 And I love her so much for that. Peak Mesugaki, the good kind. :meguu:


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Also, is this how she goes to school? Don't Japan has school uniforms law?
Yes, a great mesugaki indeed. It is not exactly as a law, every school enforces their ruling, the fact they're not wearing one probably means they're in a public school. There are four types of schools in Japan, the ones usually portrait in manga/anime are private ones (which always use a uniform).
 
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I think i like her better than most teasing anime girls
She isnt really afraid and is quite bold stating her affection
Even if it is just a tease
She doesn't really deny liking him
She actually leans more into it which is honestly a fresh take
I just question what would happen if mc took the bait with her offers
Would she have the defense to bounce back and comply
Or is she all offense no defense type of gal and crumple when people take her offers seriously
Hopefully we get to see more sides of her if MC stops being a pushover
Yeah I have zero issues with the Brat in this manga. But I just absolutely that the MMC.
 
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We're 4 chapters in and I gotta say, I think the one shot version of her is way better. Being a child with her first crush, she may look confident but she needs more signs of faltering. This is what I think the oneshot did far better. It heightens the tension and makes it feel more believable. LIke the struggle between the two of them isn't totally one-sided from the reader's perspective. Considering she basically wins every chapter anyways, the wins feel more satisfying after watching a hard fought battle (or the appearance of one).

Another thing I don't like, going from the oneshot to the manga: the children look too clean and the teacher looks less clean.

The brat comes off a bit closer to a himedere, and the boy comes off a bit closer to pampered. Their rougher appearances in the one shot sold the idea of their amateur-ness and made them feel like underdogs—makes you wanna cheer harder for their lofty attempts.

As for the teacher: making her less clean devalues the "trophy" or "model-prize" prop-characterization that both children climb towards.
 

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