Ore no Ie no Koakuma Imouto - Vol. 2 Ch. 40

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Does that mean "they're better when you don't do them because they look like shit", "you don't have to go through all that effort to do them" or another reason? :meguusmug:
They look really good.

I don't think translating sfx is generally necessary, because we can figure out what they are from context. There are a few times when it can help to clarify what is happening, but that isn't usually the case. The other thing is: a lot readers don't even notice if sfx are translated or not. I don't think you should redraw the sfx unless it is something you enjoy doing. Another option is to leave the original Japanese and put the translation above it in a smaller font, or in the margin. Again, I think your redraws look good, and I am grateful for your work.

Lastly, feel free to completely ignore this message. You should do what you want.
 
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They look really good.

I don't think translating sfx is generally necessary, because we can figure out what they are from context. There are a few times when it can help to clarify what is happening, but that isn't usually the case. The other thing is: a lot readers don't even notice if sfx are translated or not. I don't think you should redraw the sfx unless it is something you enjoy doing. Another option is to leave the original Japanese and put the translation above it in a smaller font, or in the margin. Again, I think your redraws look good, and I am grateful for your work.

Lastly, feel free to completely ignore this message. You should do what you want.
This. I was too lazy to type it out, lol.
It's nice to see SFX, especially those that are done well really elevates the work; but most of the time it was just a tiny part of the work that you don't really notice it; so, to me who can't do shit about art & drawing, I feel like this is a humongous task that you shouldn't have to put yourself through when the appreciation for it is hugely disproportionate for most case.
 
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Things are actually getting spicy. :meguupog:

Now that his hands are getting busy, Onii-chan isn't backing down anymore. He's getting close (to doing the deed) and so are we (to the end). Love how both of their thoughts are revealed in this scene, so that means they're both beginners to this.

Skill-based matchmaking wins again. 👌

I think you did a good job on the SFX, it looks seamless to me, and TBH I didn't even notice until you pointed it out because it just looked natural. Thanks for the TL!
 

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