Ore no Level Up ga Okashii!: Dekiru Otoko no Isekai Tensei - Vol. 3 Ch. 21 - I’m back

[MangaDex]

 

[Dranzer86]

The type setting has gotten a little better however the text style still needs to be improved a bit

 

[Dekker]

I feal like there was a section missing between the end of the last chapters and the start of this one.

Anycase I think your doing a bang up job with the scanlation! My only advice is try not to split words between lines

E.G. page 7

Compared to (my bad font aside) this

 

[happyhafer]

I feal like there was a section missing between the end of the last chapters and the start of this one.

Anycase I think your doing a bang up job with the scanlation! My only advice is try not to split words between lines

E.G. page 7

i second that. while it may not always be possible to fit an entire sentence in one bubble part, having at least the full words in one line should nearly always be easy to accomplish.
and if it isn't please at least add a '-' at the end of the word to signal the rest is in the next line.

besides, as long as it doesn't cover anything important you could also just make the speech bubbles bigger yourself. i have seen quite a few series where the scanlator teams tried to redraw sections and adjust the bubbles with great success.
it may be too much effort for one person, but slapping a bigger bubble ontop of the existing ones isn't difficult work. just make a new layer between the cleaned text version picture and your translation text layer and add the bubbles there until it looks good enough.

for the page shown above i would suggest making a bubble that covers the tiny bubble part and the middle part to make one bigger bubble with enough width to fit the word 'understanding' in one line.
or alternatively to make a bigger diagonal bubble out of all three parts. though this approach will need more effort to fit the text if you don't use some fancy speech bubble bound text field function.

 

[Jdog2012]

Thanks for the added tips guys. I guess I was a little too focused on keeping the text as big as possible in those situations. I will make sure that the quality will be better in the future.

A big thank you to the guy--and you know who you are--that sent me the other tip!

P.S. Feel free to discuss the story itself too, lol.

 

[Serakym]

Thanks for the added tips guys. I guess I was a little too focused on keeping the text as big as possible in those situations. I will make sure that the quality will be better in the future.

A big thank you to the guy--and you know who you are--that sent me the other tip!

P.S. Feel free to discuss the story itself too, lol.

Ay thanks for updating this story. I worked as a typesetter and QC a few years back and stopped due, well life. Since I really enjoy this story if you want I'm down to give you a few tips. You can message me here or on discord if you want. Same nickname.

 

[Kimiru]

The type setting has gotten a little better however the text style still needs to be improved a bit

On the font subject, I'd recommend Komika Text, which is available for free. And while not being public domain, don't have any real limitation.

 

[Bibliothecarius]

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

 

[delta_angelfire]

ohhh the end of this chapter felt like an axe falling so glad to know there are at least a dozen more chapters

 

[CucarachaEnojada]

Why are the text bubbles...dirty?

 

[Kanelel]

Is Alex secretly a girl or is he going to be gender swapped?

 

[966socho]

Is Alex secretly a girl or is he going to be gender swapped?

I mean Alex has been in the men's bath with Zarmen. That at least rules out the "crossdressing woman" scenario. "Illusion spell", "shape-shifting hermaphrodite", "unintentional transformation" are all still in play.

Subverting all expectations, it would be cool if Alex does turn out to be a man (and remain a man), just one that is so friendly and and cute to make you doubt the facts.

 

[Amariithynar]

I feal like there was a section missing between the end of the last chapters and the start of this one.

Anycase I think your doing a bang up job with the scanlation! My only advice is try not to split words between lines

E.G. page 7

Compared to (my bad font aside) this

This works, but it disregards the visual flow and forces a left-right reorientation that you want to try to avoid; that's why you want to follow the lines of the text balloons still. The real problem is that the line breaks are being placed mid-syllable, which just does NOT work in English. I also used a terrible font, but here is a simple refactoring of how it is put that makes it instantly much more readable. You could also do a break at "succ" for "succ-¶essful," (where the ¶ pilcrow is a line break), shifting the line breaks going forward ahead a word, so it'd be "you will", "give us", and "the item." instead. We could also move the "the" at the top to the end of the first section, so there isn't quite so much empty space there, and have "search" be more the definer for width of the column.

 

[Kanelel]

I mean Alex has been in the men's bath with Zarmen. That at least rules out the "crossdressing woman" scenario. "Illusion spell", "shape-shifting hermaphrodite", "unintentional transformation" are all still in play.

Subverting all expectations, it would be cool if Alex does turn out to be a man (and remain a man), just one that is so friendly and and cute to make you doubt the facts.

I think Zarmen should go deep in his boy hole either way.

 

[Wolvenworks]

Is Alex secretly a girl or is he going to be gender swapped?

No. He’s just androgynous-looking at best. The kinda guy that makes everyone second-guess their boner.

 

[Kurogawa]

The type setting has gotten a little better however the text style still needs to be improved a bit

agreed. the font style is a bit too stiff so it felt more like reading a document than a manga. a more rounded/smooth font is better for this kind of stuff. something like whizbang could work

I think Zarmen should go deep in his boy hole either way.

to quote a random guy on the internet "still smash, the joystick is just a bonus"

 

[Jatopian]

fanfiction.net... that's a name I haven't heard in a long time... (because AO3 exists now...)