Osananajimi wo Erabenai! - Ch. 13 - Buncha Cuties Over Here

[RandomReads777]

nvm

 

[Juggernautbob]

Eh, it had a good run, it tried to be a rip off of 100 girlfriends too much I think, it should've leaned more into it's own story.

What I mean by a rip off is this:

1: divine or supernatural reason for why he has to have a harem.

2: he decides to love all of them because he just really loves them (huh, sounds like a certain dude with a lot of girlfriends...)

3: he convinces them to enter a relationship with himself and the others through various shenanigans.

4: at this point, just read 100 girlfriends, it has funnier jokes, more consistent updates, and more variety in girlfriends. Not to mention much more character depth.

It would have seemed like less of a ripoff if there was literally anything different. Such as the main character's personality, it would've been interesting if he found it troublesome or a bother to do all of this, and/or failed to convince one of them, leading to them getting deleted. But this story just lacks all tension and originality.

 

[Juggernautbob]

Yeah I'm not feeling this development, also why did we have to do a lesbian one? 🙄🙄

Because everyone's at least a little gay (possibly), so it makes sense that one of her splinters would be.

If anything, a lack of a lesbian splinter would be incredibly amazing, because it would mean she had zero attraction on any level towards women, which is abnormal in my opinion.

Edit: what I mean by that is that, she would also need to have zero awareness of how a woman could even be attractive, including herself, because even the slightest idea or concept of what an attractive woman is would result in a lesbian splinter. So basically she would need to lack human emotion to a certain degree.

 

[Juggernautbob]

Lesbian Karin after other Karins... Obligatory: "Is this considered "gay" or "masturbation"?"

You know, the very second I saw her immediately leap on the other Karin's boobs I thought: "ah, so here's the splinter that's a result of her masterbation, got it." Because what else could that possibly be?

 

[nivad]