Osoraku Kanojo wa Ore no Aniki wo Neratteru - Ch. 2

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This would be good if it wasn’t so skin deep. He’s got real trauma and distrusts all women, and yet he’s still getting easily flustered all the time? Sorry that just doesn’t add up, it’s contradictory to me.
 
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I think it'd be really fun (tl note: narratively interesting) to have it turn out that she actually is only talking to him to get closer to his brother. Because then they'll have to work through that somehow in a way that'd probably be less forced and definitely more meaningful than the inevitable misunderstanding that'll happen.
 
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This would be good if it wasn’t so skin deep. He’s got real trauma and distrusts all women, and yet he’s still getting easily flustered all the time? Sorry that just doesn’t add up, it’s contradictory to me.
I don't think it's real deep trauma, just experience. Plus he's a teenage boy, so he's still hopeful. He's been burned before, but he still wants to believe, so his optimism is in conflict with his experience.
 

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