Otherworldly Evil Monarch - Ch. 13

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Honestly been reading this novel over last few days. I'm so disappointed yet will continue to read it.

Character interactions and overall plot are good perhaps even great. Plot holes? Character inconsistencies? Overall random wtf moments? Yeah this author seems to not remember any of the details.

Some examples female character described as jealous AND unwilling to share later becomes most open minded. 300 original people were cut down to 250 but magically returned to 300 very short time. Time skips. Supposed to be 3 years yet somehow it's only 1 year in age but plot advanced 3? Those are just things I consider not spoilers to list off the top of my head. I suppose worst is strength levels and how they're randomly changed/higher experts are always just 'there'.
 

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