Otome Danshi ni Koisuru Otome - Vol. 4 Ch. 470 - Nightmare

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@Fixel Isn't it a good thing if you suck at writing like an asshole? It means your writing is better than an asshole's writing.

Btw, this comment of mine is an example of how to write like an asshole. If you added a comma before the word "like", this could have been avoided.
 
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Worst part? He was the one who gave her that plushie on their christmas together.
 
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Nah, what everyone really wants is for this to be in a normal manga format and not 4-koma. 4-koma is great and works for many things. But not this. This would be better in normal manga format. Imagine how much more dramatic this chapter would be with better paneling. More dynamic to fit how her bunny and heart got ripped up
 
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Yeah looks like it was the stress of deadlines and he snapped at her when she was trying to play/cheer him up.

Just a lot of bad timing everywhere
 
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Nooooooooo Usagi-chan.
She looks adorable but wanna play but immediately heartbreaking in end :(
 

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