Our Eruption Festival - Vol. 1 Ch. 16 - That's How Things Go...

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I liked this. The setting, characters and art direction all clicked with me. The only thing really dragging it down is the narrative - it isn't nearly as focused or as engaging as I feel it ought to be. The part where Sakurajima got a girlfriend should have been removed to make for more time to explore the friendship between him and Toyama, and the part where the two drifted apart caught me way off guard - I genuinely had no clue what was happening. Still, for a story seeking to capture the bonds of friendship, I'd say it succeeds in that respect.
 

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