Outo One Ope Golem Master. Masakano Tsuihou!? ~Jiyuu no mi ni Nattanode Deshi no Bijin Yuusha-tachi to Issho ni Saikyou Gouremu Tsukurimasu. Modotte …

[Siquall]

Guess it's a pass.

 

[ryuumajin]

sigh
Of course

 

[Tavero]

Premise is actually interesting. Bonus points for not being a shitsekai which seems to be a rare case nowadays.

However the art is very messy and amateurish: characters change their faces between panels, poses look weird and without dynamic, and backgrounds are missing.

Additionally the pacing and writing is horrible. The plot moves so fast, the story ist all over the place: MC was talking to the merchant as if he was an old friend. At least that's what I thought...until he told him he was a merchant...
The dialogue is comes off very unnatural and forced.

 

[ShadowSilence]

Wait, sorry...


The international what now?

 

[goodhunter]

lmfao, this girl really just went ahead and said "sure, as my reward, let me and 5 of my other baddie friends forever smash our daddy Horus"

 

[rookienumbers]

I can't be the only one surprised when bro Thanos snapped the people (who were actually his golems) away.

MC must have some serious rizz to make a group of chicks kill the demon lord and save the world just to be able to marry him 😭🙏

With how he's acting he prolly said "I'll think about it" and they took that as a yes

 

[8bitholic]

I unconsciously clicked my tongue when i read that, i hope it's not another harem slop

 

[Simpleton]

Page 27 last panel - last bubble duplicates second to last bubble instead of using the actual text meant for that bubble.

 

[penguinzmassacre]

she did what? first chapter and she want a reverse harem?

 

[Shinku435]

The pace is a bit extreme for a first chapter