Paladin Dad

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Well I must say stuff like this is rather common but so far 12 chapters in it isn't bad so i'll keep an eye on it.
 
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That's sad Floppy fish dropped this, floppy's version was so clean, I wonder if I'm not going to drop that lmao
 
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It's "okay". The premise is interesting but a big issue (as of chapter 21) is that the pacing is really, really bad. Everything is fast-paced/rushed and there isn't really time for things to be fleshed out. It's just one thing after the other that it feels like the author has a checklist he's rapidfiring meeting
 

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