Huh... in the end, this one seemed to be much ado about nothing. Nothing really grew or changed, a lot of the comedy fell flat for me, and the girls love elements ranged from treated as a joke to extremely minor.
I got some chuckles and screenshots out of this, so it's fun enough, especially for the length. The GL is suggested/borderline nonexistent at best, so don't read for that. Very silly and enjoyable though!