Ponkotsu Kawaii Mamiya-san: Shanai no Bijin Kouhou ga Tonari no Seki ni Isuwaru Ken - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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The focus on over-describing her and putting her on a pedestal for how perfect and unattainable she is is kind of cringey. I get the point is to set up that she's way out of his league, but at some point it stops sounding like you're describing a person and more like you're jerking it to a statue of a god or something.

EDIT: I actually feel like I must've read this before and the old chapters got nuked or something, because this ended up super familiar and the whole thing is cringey with the constant "but I'm just a doormat introvert loser who happens to be famous and popular at something even though that doesn't matter and nobody could ever like a worthless nothing like me and I shouldn't get delusional about thinking someone might actually see me as a person when I'm just a walking piece of trash" internal monologue.

I get the point is to appeal to beaten down loser parts of the audience for self-insert/identification purposes, but the writing is so bad that the MC's every thought is laid on super thick with an air of "GET IT? DO YOU GET IT? I FEAR I'M BEING TOO SUBTLE IN EXPLAINING WHAT'S GOING ON SO HERE IS ME BEING EXTREMELY BLATANT SO THAT YOU GET IT."
 
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Somehow it's already on my follow list but i dont remember anything
 

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