I think I made a mistake on page 19. "For the first time, I think I'm in love with a someone." Besides the random "a" in between with and someone, I think he actually said:
"I think for the first time, there exists a person that I like."
But even that could be wrong. /shrugs
And I do want to chime in that this isn't a replacement for Akagi + Kaji. It's a completely different story/premise. It would be wrong to dismiss it just because of that, as I think it's still overall pretty decent. But as with all of the other stories by this author... don't expect a perfect ending.