Priscilla's Marriage Request - Ch. 4

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Nothing prevents her from disintegrating this bitch into vapor with magic, without even a trace being left, and selling her stuff to pay the debt off. But we choose the hard way. Have to fill the chapters with something, right?

Also, of course MC goes for that over-the-top Chad character.
 
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@heml8ck same. There’s just no getting away from the gendered power dynamic in hetromance. 😩 The fem lead must always be weak enough, financially/physically/socially/whatever, to be in a position to be rescued or protected by the male lead.

I got my hopes up when I saw she wasn’t going to be completely defenseless (w the magical talent/training), but that flashback crushed ’em. 😢
 
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As a proofreader, you have missed the arrows being shot with the command "fire" that only applies to firearms.
Command to shoot from the weapons using rope tension, including , but not limited to bows, arbalests, ballistae, trebuchets, cataphracti and catapultae is "loose".

I hope the information above will be of use to you in projects from now on.
 
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I want to imagine a scenario where they instead strip the stepmother out of all that expensive jewelry... If the stepmother can guilt trip her daughter into a lifetime of horrible marriage, I don't see why Priscilla couldn't let her sacrifice even half hard luxuries from the stepmother and say it is for the good of the household. Ask her to weigh the rest of her daughter's life verses her useless sparkly stuff in front of the whole household. She can't just say I'll ruin your life for my material luxuries in public, can she? Pry open that Hag's stash! It's gotta be worth something if it's making them bankrupt!
 

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