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I hope this doesn’t sound bad, but this is the perfect example of a situation where Tourette’s would be deadly- “off with their head” is your tic but you’re royalty in charge of ruling the people...
Queen of Hearts in Wonderland - Vol. 1 Ch. 2.1 - ♡ Joker
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Ok. I like this concept of she's under a curse and is not actually evil.
Actually a croissant hat on the wall, and a boat hat, and a animal ears 'hat' on p.g. 5
This chapter is aptly named joker for how much of a joke it is
- 'joker' isn't wearing his hat on p.g. 9 (and 7), and although that position may be possible for smaller hats, the more likely answer is that the mangaka drew the character and an assistant hurriedly added on the hat later. On the same frame it appears as if 'joker' only has one leg
- p.g. 9 MC has chitose's surprised expression
-p.g. 3, used the same background characters (2) for both inside and outside the shop, and the clothes are levitating in the air. Why would you hang a dress, trousers, and a skirt all in the same section?
- 'joker' 's hat lacks details in some frames, and is not orientated correctly on his head in other frames, shows the mangaka's inexperience with drawing the subject, which is peculiar considering that it is a centre piece for the character
STORYBOARDING EXISTS FOR A REASON, DRAFTS EXISTS FOR A REASON, a lack of practice is not an excuse
Sure you may think it's nitpicking, but you also need to understand that often, a person's opinion of something is often subconsciously influenced by normally unnoticeable things, and that a polished work is better than an unpolished one
P.S. dropped
This chapter is aptly named joker for how much of a joke it is
- 'joker' isn't wearing his hat on p.g. 9 (and 7), and although that position may be possible for smaller hats, the more likely answer is that the mangaka drew the character and an assistant hurriedly added on the hat later. On the same frame it appears as if 'joker' only has one leg
- p.g. 9 MC has chitose's surprised expression
-p.g. 3, used the same background characters (2) for both inside and outside the shop, and the clothes are levitating in the air. Why would you hang a dress, trousers, and a skirt all in the same section?
- 'joker' 's hat lacks details in some frames, and is not orientated correctly on his head in other frames, shows the mangaka's inexperience with drawing the subject, which is peculiar considering that it is a centre piece for the character
STORYBOARDING EXISTS FOR A REASON, DRAFTS EXISTS FOR A REASON, a lack of practice is not an excuse
Sure you may think it's nitpicking, but you also need to understand that often, a person's opinion of something is often subconsciously influenced by normally unnoticeable things, and that a polished work is better than an unpolished one
P.S. dropped
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