Honestly this is pretty fucking hilarious. The monster and our cute little MC makes a good duo. I hope they do not get seperated. Especially fucking lost my sides when they were saying "SOMETHING'S COMING I'M COMING" and "DON'T COME DON'T COME"
p19 a vermin wouldn't hardly have -> a vermin would hardly have
p38 knocked it off balance... Now... I've got a clean swing at his whole body -> [it/he inconsistency; IIRC on previous pages the monster was called "it"]
p42 They're all... Playing golf... With the company president. -> They're all... playing golf... with the company president.
yeah and I guess there is the feeling of the gantz suit that is just riped from that, perhaps some blame! too, with the designs of the black suit thing
ankoku delta is probably a better example of dorohedoro, this seems very much more similar to that magilumiere series which also has a protagonist with the same personality