Rai Rai Rai - Vol. 2 Ch. 4 - Rising Sun

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Don't trust the captain. I don't trust anyone who casually has a 13 wait 13 orphans.
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @AncientMage
  • p1 resign-ation -> resig-nation
  • p2 I can't accommodate for this -> I can't accommodate this
  • p4 for everyone--a prosperous -> [the "--" should probably be an em dash: —]
  • p9 & p11 & p13 special force unit -> special forces unit [that's consistent with c3p35 - https://mangadex.org/chapter/8f518501-f826-42c7-a18e-25dfef0f502a/35]
  • p11 muso -> musou
  • p19 Don't knock 'til you've tried it -> Don't knock it 'til you've tried it
 
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Captain sure has the passion :meguu:
Sumire also looks mighty fine in her bodysuit
 

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