Dex-chan lover
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iirc the kid isSo normally, you write an inner palace story with multiple consorts vying for internal power, mainly having the intentions of each character being gaining more favor/affection with a specific guy. Secret homunculus child is weird, especially making them an antagonidt after developing the two leads is awful cause you're making the audience frustrated at a fictional child or suprised incompetebce of the two peoplr you just built up as competent. Cmon man, if this conclusion isn't satisfying im gonna drop this
either his nephew or cousin