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Crosses the Line Twice: The Series
You don't seem to understand what fluff refers to and still think its good because the MC is just a less terrible person compared to everyone else? If you find it entertaining, that's on you, I am not reading this trash. Redo at least had good writingSo being using your powers to the utmost of their potential is considered super duper OP? they even explained why it’s ass the MC is just a smart fella that won fights using his brains and his opponents powers against them, The MC is not that much likeable but he isn’t a villain, like you would do better if you were enslaved and had to fight for your life to not become even more miserable in the end bro was following rules yet redo of healer MC became like the people who tortured him, sick and twisted and didn’t care about others while still had a complete free will to stop, This got a lot of potential if it was written much more better but it’s still entertaining nonetheless
Its still getting updates though?This is by the author of "battle in 5 seconds" which i think was axed. I guess he decided to just give up after it failed.
fight 1 : the girl tried to copy mc, but she is wearing anti fire armor so fire is not dangerous to her and won't trigger her backstep.Why Mc shouldn't have won any of the fights:
Fight one: if backstep can be used infinitely with no cooldown then his opponent is basically immortal as any attack the Mc uses would be dodged. The opponent could just wear the Mc out because she's stronger so she has more stamina.
Fight 2: money for preparation aside, Mc has no way of keeping that candy in his mouth after getting punched and knocking the wind out of him from his back slamming against a wall as well. He was punched with so much force that spit was spilling out of his mouth, anyone could assume there's nothing held in his mouth. Not sure how physics works but he could have easily ended up accidentally swallowing the candy or spitting it out from the force of her punch. Not to mention, he doesn't have guarantees that she'd grab him by his neck. Or that his spit could hit. Just that she likes to break joints. Unless his psychoanalysis was so good that he can predict her every behavior his plan has like, no way of working.
Fight 3: Mc should not be able to practise the skill on himself because the area demonstrated can not even span half his body.his opponent's skill is 2 meters cubed but his training partner's skill, even if it's 1 metre, would fail to work as 50 cm would mean his upper body only maximum. Any practise with teleporting himself would just result in him passing out from blood loss because he's lost half his body, which contains half his blood. His gamble was foolish at best and fatal if he wasn't the Mc.