@Kayriel that's fine but that isn't what they are doing. We have his siblings and what they are/could be doing right now, have the main story itself, we have whatever the nobles and that fort are doing or planning, we have whatever the witches are doing right now, plus all the various things the MC is going through as well. It seems to me that having more than 5 different central plot points all going on at the same time is a bad idea. Because as i said it's too busy. How can we care or even remember the plot point with the nobles and that fortress if we have not even mentioned them for god knows how many chapters now, and in the mean time are filling up with more events happening at once, more characters to remember, more new villains "btw how many does that make now? We got the corrupt church, his siblings, the witches, that fortess, the demons, and any number of nobles out there". The pacing is a complete mess now.
@sircusa your right, they are. But they are pacing it too fast. Just as soon as one plot thread starts another one pops up 1 to 2 chapters later. It's like oh his siblings are the bad guys, no wait it's the people at the fortress too, no wait demons, that's right there are demons, NO WAIT there are evil witches too, OH hold on there are evil people in a church scheming things too, no WAIT! you get it right? Like the story is on cocaine or something. There is something to be said for a slow burn and setting things up properly rather than rushing from event to event and more and more new enemies before old ones are even taken care of.