Rental Hero

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It's interesting, but honestly I expect some more low-tier gigs first. It'd probably keep my interest if it's a "I'll act as you for X amount of time, so have the day off" instead of "I act as your normal real-life persona"
 
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Quality of this story dropped so fast.
Beginning was awesome but after 10 chapters quality of art dropped, it became worse than those manhua that has more than 100 chapters in few months (we all know what kind of stories I am talking about). There are a lot of inconsistencies, like MC physique that went from small guy to 2 meter tall, buff guy without any explanation or anything.
Worldbuilding is nonexistent. Heroes destroy cities and no one cares. Non hero people don't even exist there.
Story... Beginning was great, that mystery... MC acting as someone else, it's good. But then MC decided that he doesn't need to act as MR. justice and decided to gain popularity as himself, without disguising himself. Somehow he even is as strong as most powerful hero in this story... Out of nowhere.
As of chapter 27, nothing special happens. Things are just are just random. Few examples:
"I met a female hero in my house. Hero tries to kill me"
"I met a male hero near my house. Hero tries to kill me" We have either that, or random fights, random decisions, random everything. It's bad already, without even starting about side characters (I am talking about all heroes trying to kill him out of nowhere. They are side characters... It's horrible)
But still despite all bad things, beginning was great. Let's hope quality rises.
 
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ngl imo i thought it was pretty interesting, honestly i thought it was pretty good, even though it does kinda feel like Deku but if he wasn't held down by the quirks restraints it does feel kinda unique because the mc has to act like 2 people at once, the way he handles things can be pretty interesting, can't wait for more chapters to really express more of my opinion but for right now i'd say it's pretty good.
 
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insanely peak. especially the character design. art is somewhat inconsistent but its very much not an issue. wish there was more character development of some side characters, there are a lot of characters and it feels like most of them got left in the dust without much involvement with the mc or any sort of story for that matter. other than that though, very interesting idea and overall very peak.
 
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Story ruined its own concept near immediately tbh. I read the description and expected a story that would delve into the personal life and psychology of a All-Might esque character but instead we get "I was working as a low level nobody but it turns out my ability was actually the strongest?!"
 
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Basically everything everyone here is saying is spot on. Great initial hook, but it feels like half of the initial premise is dropped 20 chapters in.

When you have an mc with powers like shapeshifting into other people, you'd typically expect things like fights to be more about decieving your opponents, but that is quickly dropped in favor of the 'I just need to punch harder' flavor of fight.

The MC's awareness and intelligence is also wildly incosistent. In the beginning, the mc felt like he had a lot of awareness of the people around him and picked up on things most mcs wouldn't have. But after the writing falls off, he forgets info mentioned to him 2 chapters ago like the berserkers not being intelligent, etc. Just stuff that makes him seem ignorant.

5/10, read something else, don't waste your time.
 
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Quality of this story dropped so fast.
Beginning was awesome but after 10 chapters quality of art dropped, it became worse than those manhua that has more than 100 chapters in few months (we all know what kind of stories I am talking about). There are a lot of inconsistencies, like MC physique that went from small guy to 2 meter tall, buff guy without any explanation or anything.
Worldbuilding is nonexistent. Heroes destroy cities and no one cares. Non hero people don't even exist there.
Story... Beginning was great, that mystery... MC acting as someone else, it's good. But then MC decided that he doesn't need to act as MR. justice and decided to gain popularity as himself, without disguising himself. Somehow he even is as strong as most powerful hero in this story... Out of nowhere.
As of chapter 27, nothing special happens. Things are just are just random. Few examples:
"I met a female hero in my house. Hero tries to kill me"
"I met a male hero near my house. Hero tries to kill me" We have either that, or random fights, random decisions, random everything. It's bad already, without even starting about side characters (I am talking about all heroes trying to kill him out of nowhere. They are side characters... It's horrible)
But still despite all bad things, beginning was great. Let's hope quality rises.
basically my opinion on it. the beginning was really interesting but the longer it goes on the worse the story gets. by chapter 50 its the exact same shounen manwha slop you'd see anywhere else.
 

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