Reporting for Duty, Duchess!

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idk man, the translation is kinda wacky

the story and art are quite nice tho
 
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Good original purpose, ruined by the author's ideas to make the story more 'interesting' by adding romance and typical drama. Imagine making a female protagonist story that doesn't have romance or the very least not an early romance. Wanna make a military focused work with a female protag? Sure but you hold off the romance until appropriate times to make it all the more sweet and rewarding
Lss, can authors stop trying to make the perfect female? And just return to the basics?
 
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Le, sHe'S nOt LiKe OtHeR gIrLs ML aside, immortal updates scanlations read like MTL with proofreading. Sometimes it isn't obvious, but when it's wrong, it's really wrong. The mistakes only seem to become more obvious as the chapters go on.

Edit: I stand corrected, the translation does get more coherent later but you might notice that there are still issues in some chapters when there are more complicated speech bubbles.
 
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Ah yes your classic badass female that the ML falls in love with immediately for not being like other girls but then more or less tries to force her to become like other girls. I imagine by the end the story the FMC will not ever pick up a weapon and be spending 100% if her time eating cake and sipping tea while the ML more or less treats her like a weak defenceless women while using his potion to threaten and scare away any other male character.
 
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Kinda gross feeling glorification of modern military. Dropped pretty early.
 

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