Return From the World of Immortals - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - The return of the earthly world

[codydub03]

🤣@XL .... you owe me a new keyboard. I spit my coffee all over it, when I was reading your comments. 🤣

 

[GoldGame]

you can tell they aren't a native English speaker from minor mistakes but overall it seems fine hell at least they didn't translate any names

 

[Kami_Nana]

@derpdederp Reluctant or not...she helped kill him. No mercy. So I don't see anything wrong with making her non-reluctant here...doesn't change what she did in either iteration.

 

[nebukanezzer]

When he woke up in the modern world, I lost interest.

A fantasy world offers more creativity.