Risou no Kanojo - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

[Grogzilla]

@G2Lone Awesome job with your first chapter, look forward to seeing more!

 

[Dogwelder]

this being adapted from hentai explains why the writing makes me brain hurt

 

[AntiDemon]

wasnt this manga a hentai lmao

 

[Alexandria46]

Bruh the heroine is looklike Ichinose from COTE 😅

 

[ibnu-ja]

based on porn? sheesh no wonder why

 

[Altair_Sama]

Wait a minute, this manga very familiar with a certain doujin I've already read it couple of months ago, ah NVM they adapt it as normal manga

 

[Sollertia_]

Huh no wonder I thought this looked familiar....

 

[VladDracul2]

Why this generic pretended relationship plot needed in the first place? The author could have just continued where the doujin left off.

Problem is that there's more than one doujin... we simply only got the first one.

 

[zephyroths]

At first I was wondering why I feel like I've seen this before. Then I checked the comment and realize where I've seen it

 

[havelmom]

raws are up to ch 3

 

[AAA1]

the premise :
' dating an ideal girlfriend that people would kill for'

The reason :
' a plot of playing pretend that mc is actually hesitate that he have no obligation even though he know the premise'

what a hollow character and lazy plot

 

[Yosoypep3]

… not sure what hentai yall talking about but this chick is 100% Ichinose from cote lmao

 

[dazedaze1111]

Interesting premise, but wtf with her ballons

 

[Giga]

the premise :
' dating an ideal girlfriend that people would kill for'

The reason :
' a plot of playing pretend that mc is actually hesitate that he have no obligation even though he know the premise'

what a hollow character and lazy plot

I would far and away prefer the first. Saeki is obviously attracted to Sara, and Sara is obviously attracted to him:

・Sara is unfailingly soft near and enthusiastic about being with Saeki
・Sara is eager to get physical with him (Her only problem was apparently fetishistic sniffing--above her pay grade)
・Her sister makes a point of informing him that she specifically chose him for the role of scarecrow boyfriend

This is only the first chapter, but they're moving a lot faster than your average MC-kun faced with a girl like that; the story still has time to veer away from that odious second route (there are a few chapters already scanlated at the time of this post; I'll soon find out). My hopes aren't up, as I've seen this play out tons of times the same way or almost the same way, but at least there's a busty female lead that's only got one flaw (even if it's a glaringly ugly one).

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Speaking of glaringly ugly flaws, Kou looks much better than Sara. Seems this artist is fond of gray alien eyes as so many others are. Sara does not live up to the hype--she may have a gorgeous body, but her face is dragged way down by its central feature: eyes that indicate a combative or hostile disposition. Hard women are not appealing--if you see a woman with eyes like that, you should know well to just save yourself the trouble and avoid entanglement. The ridiculous thing is that Sara isn't hard (under most circumstances, anyway), it's just that artists love slapping angry eyes on every girl without regard for their actual demeanor.

Even worse, the author can do better than this--I've seen her Pixiv. ("Her" because, if not a pen name, the name Marimo is female. Reminds me that I still need to force my way through the end of Muv-Luv Extra's Meiya route to get to the good stuff. I do not have the patience for Sumika's route.)