@boyd
The sentences seems more make senses in this version than the previous..
But the font etc looked like it was made in hurry for this version..
Oh yeah, another note is that the characters name are inconsistent in both versions (that's some similarities LOL)..
Thank you a lot for ur effort mate, since not even 1 team want to take this manga which got quite nice stories (although it's hentai, and hentais rarely give any thought to story)..
The sentences seems more make senses in this version than the previous..
But the font etc looked like it was made in hurry for this version..
Oh yeah, another note is that the characters name are inconsistent in both versions (that's some similarities LOL)..
Thank you a lot for ur effort mate, since not even 1 team want to take this manga which got quite nice stories (although it's hentai, and hentais rarely give any thought to story)..