I like the situation & characters, but god this is sloooow. 10 chapters in, and we've barely moved past the initial setup. Every five-minute interaction gets stretched over 2 or 3 chapters in which ... nothing ... happens ... while the dialogue & narration restate the same basic info and positions over and over again:
She: "I'm a provocative free spirit who loves and is also messing with you haha!"
He: "I have reservations."
She: "I'm a provocative free spirit who loves and is also messing with you haha!"
He: "I have reservations."
She: "I'm a provocative free spirit who loves and is also messing with you haha!"
He: "I have reservations."
She: "I'm a provocative free spirit..."
And on and on and on andonandon. While the pages are all relentlessly boring face grids. It's maddening.
Still on board tho