Ryuubatsu no Fiera - Ch. 1 - The Spark

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at least the brother manage to talk to her one last time, usually when a character argue right before a disaster, they just die so the MC feel some guilty over the "my last word to them is i hate you" trope
 
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seems interesting but the writing is abit weird, shes super strong but everyones just brushin her off like shes delusional, makes no sense
 
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Solid chapter. She gives off Nightreign Revenant energy with that Moonlight GS lmao.
 
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Intriguing high fantasy with solid character motives. The art is very well done too.
 
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seems interesting but the writing is abit weird, shes super strong but everyones just brushin her off like shes delusional, makes no sense
Don't know if I would quite call it delusional, and more that she was nieve. I think this is more a case of her living in the shadow of an older brother. Not that one could call a teenager that can win a swordfight against every knight in the king weak, but if her brother did so at an even younger age, it raises the bar for the siblings that follow.

So since they already had the brother, the royal family was grooming her for marriage. And to that end some of her maids were trying to distract her from her goals, while the head maid scolded and lectured. Therefore I don't think they thought her delusional, just headstrong and nieve. Her duty was to be the bride of the neighboring kingdom, since the title she desired was already assigned to her brother.
 
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solid opening. i like the classic style of artstyle and the story has that old school fantasy feeling.
since the FMC going to be the "Brawn", hopefully her fiancee could be her "brain"

imo the maid ignoring her want and keep putting her down into marraige is actually beyond the usual mysgynistic medieval trope. the maid action can be interpreted as not wanting her to get reckless and over her head just because she is strong. also her brother already said that her fiancee-to-be is someone who will let her exhibit her strength. considering the Sword also a collab project with him, its possible he will recognize her strength right away

so the amrriage could actually a net positive instead of staying in country where she get shadowed by her brother who may not be as strong as her.
 

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