S-Rank Monster no Behemoth Dakedo, Neko to Machigawarete Erufu Musume no Kishi (Pet) Toshite Kurashitemasu - Ch. 74

[gmhh]

Like this story NEEDS a beach chapter. Elf girl's 'armor' is skimpier than most lingerie.

I'm honestly kinda surprised Dragon girl was wearing a competition swimsuit rather than a micro or mesh fabric.

 

[popo53414]

 

[sarssol]

god forbid if this dude evolves into something remotely humanoid. elves are perverts………

If he evolved into something humanoid, they would probably be disappointed

 

[vodspod]

This last arc feels like someone who was following an interesting path in the woods tripped and stumbled down a hill. I hope it doesn't end up in a river rushing away.

 

[Grikath]

Chapter summary: The Plot was minimally covered in the pursuit of Fanservice.

 

[gmhh]

This last arc feels like someone who was following an interesting path in the woods tripped and stumbled down a hill. I hope it doesn't end up in a river rushing away.

Whenever I see double-isekai like this, or (fantasy-to-isekai maybe?), I think of the way the Smartphone WN went. The author Introduced a bunch of characters, including more than a dozen cute girls for the main character to get close to, introduced a huge number of locations and had some big battles in them, but then didn't go into detail exploring ANY of that. Everything is surface-level only. Instead they sent the MC to another isekai world to chase the big-bad. I gave up on it at that point, so I don't know if the story ever got back to the first world, or if MC just started building harems across different parallel universes.

This is at least focusing on cat and elf-girl for the most part, but it still feels like the author started to get pressure to introduce a bunch of new characters and locations at the beginning of the arc. Or maybe they got told, 'You need some more typical isekai elements like a meeting with the gods, forced transmigration,' etc...

 

[vodspod]

Whenever I see double-isekai like this, or (fantasy-to-isekai maybe?), I think of the way the Smartphone WN went. The author Introduced a bunch of characters, including more than a dozen cute girls for the main character to get close to, introduced a huge number of locations and had some big battles in them, but then didn't go into detail exploring ANY of that. Everything is surface-level only. Instead they sent the MC to another isekai world to chase the big-bad. I gave up on it at that point, so I don't know if the story ever got back to the first world, or if MC just started building harems across different parallel universes.

This is at least focusing on cat and elf-girl for the most part, but it still feels like the author started to get pressure to introduce a bunch of new characters and locations at the beginning of the arc. Or maybe they got told, 'You need some more typical isekai elements like a meeting with the gods, forced transmigration,' etc...

personally I would be fine with a story which has such a large scope, the problem is when the story completely changes scope in a short time without the foundation to keep engagement. I know of one story I really like where the main character transports back and forth between the real world and the isekai world and I like it pretty well, even though it expands the scope a lot, but it does it at a pretty consistent pace. I also think I would find it difficult if a story went from really large scope to a small scope over a short period.