Sabori nara Hokenshitsu de Douzo? - Ch. 16

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I don't know if this was an axe as much as there wasn't much left to do in the story without a serious crime being committed. Plus, nurse-san already had to deal with that shit before against her will bc some dumb kid acted out after she rejected her.

It's honestly a kindness that our little heroine didn't latch onto the nurse and tempt her heart for years until she'd finally graduate. Even if she held out, do you think the nurse would feel good about shacking up with a girl fresh out of high school that she (because she has a moral compass) would feel like she groomed.

The mc is really smart for taking the hard but most kind way to get her love. Creating a boundary so the nurse doesn't have to suffer a repeat of her trauma and then proving the sincerity of her love by coming back a fully fledged equal. Now the nurse has no reason to feel guilt, no risk of being put on a list and has every reason to believe that mc's love for her is as true as can be. MC is a really well developed character to go that far for the person she loves at such a young age. The willpower and conviction is romantic af.

That was really the only place left for the story to go without doing an entire arc of them being depressed and us just watching their forbidden love produce chapters of angst with no story progression. This seems like a logical and reasonable place for the story to go. Somewhat lacking in oomph but still a very good ending I believe.
 
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The skip to reach it sucks but that was a pretty good way to finish it. I was almost thinking they were going to tease us without the kiss like some series do.
 
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Honestly, I'm quite content with this ending. I don't think there's really a good way to make this kind of story work out without either doing a time skip, dragging it out needlessly, or turning one of them into a paedophile.
i feel like "anemone feels the heat" quite well, because of two of the side characters but it's japan so it might be different culturally but i still like the way it was done
 

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Sloppy kiss is really really good, but this chapter could have happened without the time skip, I understand the logic, but the people that picked up this manga didn't do it for them to get together until they are adults.
 
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Thank you very much for translating the story until the end!

And despite it being so short I greatly enjoyed it. However, I wish there would be a similar work with the same art that would last a tad bit longer.
 
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I don't know if this was an axe as much as there wasn't much left to do in the story without a serious crime being committed. Plus, nurse-san already had to deal with that shit before against her will bc some dumb kid acted out after she rejected her.

It's honestly a kindness that our little heroine didn't latch onto the nurse and tempt her heart for years until she'd finally graduate. Even if she held out, do you think the nurse would feel good about shacking up with a girl fresh out of high school that she (because she has a moral compass) would feel like she groomed.

The mc is really smart for taking the hard but most kind way to get her love. Creating a boundary so the nurse doesn't have to suffer a repeat of her trauma and then proving the sincerity of her love by coming back a fully fledged equal. Now the nurse has no reason to feel guilt, no risk of being put on a list and has every reason to believe that mc's love for her is as true as can be. MC is a really well developed character to go that far for the person she loves at such a young age. The willpower and conviction is romantic af.

That was really the only place left for the story to go without doing an entire arc of them being depressed and us just watching their forbidden love produce chapters of angst with no story progression. This seems like a logical and reasonable place for the story to go. Somewhat lacking in oomph but still a very good ending I believe.
She'd have no problem getting them together. Her other series are also age gap romances of similar distance. It's what she's known for and this series is actually a spin off of one of those age gap stories, "A Collar Only For You." The nurse was a side character. "I Want to Spoil Ms. Yoroizuka Rotten" was also another sweet age gap romance of about the same distance and they're dating from the start. This just seems like it ended earlier than it was intended.
 
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Thanks for the translations. Sad to see this one go. Happy ending at least, but now I want a series about them working together in the same school.
 
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that kiss almost made up for the stupid timeskip and abrupt ending. considering the axe i think it ended as well as it couldve.
 
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o7, the axe is here. I feel so sad bro, ts is so good and had so much potential
 
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Probably axed, but i am confident that this was going to be the ending anyways :thumbsup:
 
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Thank you very much for translating the story until the end!

And despite it being so short I greatly enjoyed it. However, I wish there would be a similar work with the same art that would last a tad bit longer.
Read the author's other series. "A Collar Only for You," is the original series, from which this one was a spin-off. Then there is "I want to Spoil Yoirozuka san." They are both similar and last longer.
 
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Bueno yo debo de decir que esperaba una historia un poco más larga seré sincero, pero no me disgusta que haya terminado así estuvo bonito la verdad me encantó, aunque me hubiera gustado ver una historia por lo menos de 30 cap, supongo que está bien fue hermoso, hubo beso y todo y me parece un gran final
 
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También le deje mi comentario a la hermosa artista o autora del manga, dijo que algún día se pensaría hacer una historia un poco más larga así que, supongo que tendremos esperanzas solo ahí que esperar
 

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