Sairin Yuusha no Fukushuu Hanashi - Vol. 1 Ch. 1

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wait did i read this manga before???
*go to novelupdate to check my reading list*
oooh now i remember wow is been 2 years sins i read it is really just a doll boring novel guess i am pot this manga on hold for now and come back where there 10 or 20 chapter
 
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I agree. While it isn't that bad on its own, it isnt good for the use in a manga. The seemingly pointless random lines on everyone's faces (which cause a lot of distortion), the disproportionate facial features (way bigger eyes and mouth than even for anime/manga standards, or having a massive chin with a tiny face), and all of the prospective angles are not aligned correctly unless they are directly facing forward.

Also, each face looks like it wanted to be drawn either rounded or angulared, but then they rounded off most of the forehead and/or jaw but angle the chin, and add sharp features like defined cheekbones and detailed noses. Half of the side shots add almost a second angle just for the chin too.

If I had to guess, I would say the artist began drawing this making up their own style, and then only drawing certain features they liked from possibly other artists, and mashed them together. They have a lot of work invested, but it not quality work in this instance. I give them credit though. Everything by itself is great, especially the designs of the magic, but everything seems to come feom a different art style and it isn't meant to be all mixed together like this. That being said, it definitely isnt the worst I have ever seen, and I think it can be easily improved upon. The artist has the ability, but they just need to reference a bit of similar charqcter designs to solidify their own style. That, or maybe if an assistant or someone with experience touched it up just a bit afterwards, then this could actually work.
 
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Probably some of the worst art I've come across in years along with the same old tired and overused "Hero is betrayed and comes back for revenge" plot. There are plenty of manga that have done it better and look better doing it.
 
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Oh my god that shit was so fucking forced like bro can this nigga not think of anything original at all to help prove why they betrayed him or change the scenario up a bit, like damn their just bad guys for no reason at all🤦‍♂️ so many mangas exactly like this dont waste your time boys
 
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talented, brilliant, incredible, amazing, show stopping, spectacular, never the same, totally unique, completely not ever been done before, unafraid to reference or not reference, put it in a blender, shit on it, vomit on it, eat it, give birth to it
 
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I thought that only chinese manhuas could be this bad.
 
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Ahh this brings me back. This novel's manga artist can't draw males I guess
 
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Between the art and the "story",at least this manga won't keep me awake at night. Dropped after the first chapter, congratulations mango, you're smelling of shit.
 
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Jesus Christ those facial expressions are bad, especially when MC is getting cut down his face looks like something out of a horror game.
 
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Why be so mediocre when taking revenge?
MC, you need to take a few pages out of other Vengeful Braves' books. Like that other one who killed the target's wife and children, cooked them, then forced target to eat them.
 
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If this thing doesn't get cancelled it's an insult to every good manga axed...
 
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I'd say furry deviantartist has more skill drawing poses and facial expression than this artist...
And they didn't even draw human.
 
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That winking catgirl animation at the end is several times better than the entire chapter that comes before it. It may have been the only thing worth reading this chapter for.
 
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At least the quality of art matches quality of plot. Points for consistency.
 
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For everyone asking, the cat girl in the credits is in fact NOT a girl...
 
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adorable cat winking at the end
fantastic
this not so much
dont get me wrong
you guys belittle yourselves this was pretty HQ
the manga itself is the problem
 

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