Succubus ga Yattekita Ohanashi - Ch. 12 - Succubus and Drawing

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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @oninn
  • p1 desert -> dessert
  • p3 Our dessert after dinner are donuts. -> Our dessert after dinner is donuts. // Our desserts after dinner are donuts.
  • p4 make my wishes -> makes my wishes
  • p4 and still haven't -> and still hasn't
  • p4 Never knew -> I never knew
  • p4 sketchbook <-> p6 sketch book x2 [either version is fine, but using both is inconsistent]
  • p6 put this on an exhibition -> display this in an exhibition
  • p6 And of course, The -> And of course, the
Thanks! I'll take note of that. Dang, my grammar's kinda sketchy nowadays.
 
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This is so wholesome.... And then she slowly starts to weaken because she hasn't sucked out any life energy and onii San will be forced to let her suck him or else she'll die from starvation.
 

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