Samurai in Another World - Ch. 19

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Villan summary here:
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Great chapter, that bloodlust is something lol.

But the artist forgot that she had an Oni arm in a few panels, which suggests to me that he doesn’t pretend that to be frequent haha
 
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Thanks for the chapter!

Typos & edit suggestions: @Hamaguy
  • p17 That arrow of light, I should be able to dodge them -> Those arrows of light, I should be able to dodge them
  • p19 you'll have to be a human -> you'd have to be a human
  • p25 extent of my resolve, -> extent of my resolve.
  • p25 oblige- to those who picked a fight -> oblige- those who picked a fight
  • (And a whole bunch of speech bubbles lack punctuation at the end:)
    • p5 moving anytime soon -> soon.
    • p6 sent her flying -> flying.
    • p8 got folded -> folded.
    • p11 touches you -> touches you!
    • p11 That's her "magic" -> "magic!
    • p11 would happen -> happen.
    • p11 Hashihime -> Hashihime.
    • p12 a lot of my mana -> mana.
    • p12 just a monster though -> though.
    • p13 attacked us -> us.
    • p14 Circe -> Circe.
    • p15 pure evil -> evil.
    • p15 beautiful creatures -> creatures.
    • p15 each other's throats -> throats.
    • p15 pouring down -> down.
    • p15 made-up justice -> justice.
    • p16 sensible beings -> beings.
    • p16 survive against the demons -> demons.
    • p16 into demons -> demons. // demons!
    • p18 turning into demons -> demons.
    • p18 seen a demon like that -> that.
    • p19 as anyone else -> else.
    • p25 a suitable "death" -> "death".
    • p27 "her world" -> "her world".
    • p27 pretty quickly -> quickly.
    • p27 into demons -> demons.
 
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Ooohhh this makes sense. But why the horn though? Style points.
I had to reread everything to see if she ever took an injury there, and the only time she did was while she was still in Japan. That's about where she was shot in the head.
So probably just style points, unless any residual damage there was healed up at the same time they dealt with her arm.
 

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