I'm just happy Rory wasn't reduced to a mere butt monkey/spectator and we've got a few chapters focused on her.
@alphamine
> Page 4 - "intresting" (come on, guys, you got it right in the previous bubble)
> Page 10 - "Here it is!", wrong tense, should be "Here they are!"
> Page 17 - "desipite"
> Page 40 - "there's no intruders", "there's no problems" again, wrong tense
> Page 41 - "reccomended", "intresting" (hard word, eh?)
> Page 42 - "I'll learn about them" [talking about "something fun"] yet again, wrong tense
What the hell is your proofreader doing?