Sawaranaide Kotesashi-kun - Vol. 4 Ch. 32 - Kouyou-kun encounter with the unknown

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Thanks for yet another chapter.

@KingoRodriguo
Change suggestions:
Page 11, panel 4/last: It's, by far -> She is by far
Page 12, panel 2, bubble 3: I get the intent with "solitary wolf type" since wolves are social animals, but it reads weird to me at least - I think "is a "lone" wolf" or "is [very] private" or "keeps to herself" fits better - I like the last one best.
 
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Thanks for yet another chapter.

@KingoRodriguo
Change suggestions:
Page 11, panel 4/last: It's, by far -> She is by far
Page 12, panel 2, bubble 3: I get the intent with "solitary wolf type" since wolves are social animals, but it reads weird to me at least - I think "is a "lone" wolf" or "is [very] private" or "keeps to herself" fits better - I like the last one best.
I switched to "keep to herself"
 

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